Open collab

[<VerbalTouch>]

Your just gunna have to add on to mine cause I lost my acapella

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6431976

[DelinQuent]

i'd jump on this, but i think you need to fix it before anyone gets on it.

you need to memorize your verse before you spit it, cause i can hear that you're reading. and better delivery will also help the flow. the lyrics are also a little weak. i don't know but it sounds like you're new to the audio scene. use your lungs when you rap, don't hold breath in, just let it all come out, you're gonna have to breathe in a lot more but the delivery gets a major overhaul from simply using more air when you spit. good luck, keep working

[Kez]

I agree with DQ, otherwise i would get on this.

[B.A.D.]

send me the pella, I'll master it and send it back

[<VerbalTouch>]

I sent you a couple things but never got a reply back