Fraudulent

[Block]

Really the only advice I have is to project your voice more, and I almost couldn't tell where the hook was. Other than that try to cut down on the echo some how, or record in another room entirely maybe.

9/10

Thanks alot, man. I explained that problem to tash.. When I project my voice louder, it has alot more reverb cos of my room. so i tried to quiet it down some, but i guess it effected it negatively in more ways than just one. i do have my closet which is a walk-in that imma set up and record in. i hope that'll help some with this issue. thanks alot for the feed, man.

[Kez]

I don't care the e-beef you been doing, i'll still give you fair reviews, like with anyone.

Beat is great
When i read the lyrics i could sense it had a good flow and it's here in the audio
Lyrics got good meaning
Delivery works
Volume/volume of voice could be a bit louder but it's alright
Chorus was off beat on the second repeat

I agree with what IceAxe said basically, but it's a great track

[Block]

Thanks for the honest feed.

[B.A.D.]

hes keeps my dick warm when axe d isnt on it.

and u talk about imature posts...

even if I don't like you at all, gotta say the lyrics are good, the topic is good from what I read cuz I couldn't hear your track.

anyways man, get my name out ya fuckin mouth, I don't care if you think you better or whatever, you continuosly post stupid insults on me, then when someone gets at you, you tripp and start actin like a bitch... for God sake, try to be a man once.

[Block]

hes keeps my dick warm when axe d isnt on it.

and u talk about imature posts...
anyways man, get my name out ya fuckin mouth, I don't care if you think you better or whatever, you continuosly post stupid insults on me, then when someone gets at you, you tripp and start actin like a bitch... for God sake, try to be a man once.

Lmao.. I didnt say shit about you till you popped your nose in shit that was none of your business in the other thread, so dont start saying that shit youngn.

I trip when people get at me? Lol... ok, right... yall make up shit worse than pinoccio.

[B.A.D.]

hes keeps my dick warm when axe d isnt on it.

and u talk about imature posts...
anyways man, get my name out ya fuckin mouth, I don't care if you think you better or whatever, you continuosly post stupid insults on me, then when someone gets at you, you tripp and start actin like a bitch... for God sake, try to be a man once.

Lmao.. I didnt say shit about you till you popped your nose in shit that was none of your business in the other thread, so dont start saying that shit youngn.

I trip when people get at me? Lol... ok, right... yall make up shit worse than pinoccio.

look man, whatever.... I'm not even gonna discuss about it.... u know whats real and what ain't, but believe me.. no body here gives a shit about us fightin on this bullshit,no need to be posting lies son. so speak what u want I know the truth as well as you...

now get off my dick

[Block]

now get off my dick

I believe you're in my thread so that makes no fucking sense at all...... lmao.

stop posting and we'll be good......

[Rain Matrix]

10/10

I'm gonna keep in it my player playboy...

I'll have a new track up tonight t0... big burkey rides again

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but on the real...... Sajjad you're being mad immature homie, lol. I don't come into your threads & shit.. hell, i could careless about you if you wouldnt tell some one to stop rapping.

lol @ you tyring to make it look as if when the feedback isnt 100% positive that the person is hating

[Block]

I guess it could be projected more, but i dont agree with the hook part... you're the first and only person to not like it. The reverb is caused by my room because it echoes. i havent set things up yet.
and truthfully, this beat was made for these type of songs... its a jedi minds beat, and this the typa song that's on it originally.

lol @ you tyring to make it look as if when the feedback isnt 100% positive that the person is hating

How am i trying to make it look like you're hating? I agreed with one part of what you said, just not all of it. I'm inclined to my own opinion, as you are yours. If I would've said "fuck outta here with that shit" or something along those lines I could see where you're coming from...... but now you're just tryna start shit cos i never once said you're hating, so fuck off.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

I guess it could be projected more, but i dont agree with the hook part... you're the first and only person to not like it. The reverb is caused by my room because it echoes. i havent set things up yet.
and truthfully, this beat was made for these type of songs... its a jedi minds beat, and this the typa song that's on it originally.

lol @ you tyring to make it look as if when the feedback isnt 100% positive that the person is hating

How am i trying to make it look like you're hating? I agreed with one part of what you said, just not all of it. I'm inclined to my own opinion, as you are yours. If I would've said "fuck outta here with that shit" or something along those lines I could see where you're coming from...... but now you're just tryna start shit cos i never once said you're hating, so fuck off.

it was a general statement to you comments with sajjad ect. i quoted the wrong reply, but no need to be telling me to fuck off


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[Speech]

....damn this beat is awesome...JMT beat man..well used ...lyrics were crazy...true stillz fo real...just a lil problems with your pronounciation from my side..you sound like you have a chewing gum in ya mouth while spitting...get rid of that ..if it's possible..mixin wasn all bad...i had to read the lyrics to understand it all tho....hmm..keep it up, and improve

8 / 10

[Block]

it was a general statement to you comments with sajjad ect. i quoted the wrong reply, but no need to be telling me to fuck off


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there put in the right quote

I dont mind negative criticism, I strive off getting better. If people dont tell me what i do wrong, then i cant get better..
You dont know the deal with sajjad.. Him and Axe d are on my dick cos of rain matrix's thread- I told sajjad not to tell some one they should just quit rapping... what the fuck kina feed is that?? So he's in here hating on me & mine cos i told him off....

@ speech - thanks for the feed, i'll deff work on those.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

it was a general statement to you comments with sajjad ect. i quoted the wrong reply, but no need to be telling me to fuck off


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there put in the right quote

I dont mind negative criticism, I strive off getting better. If people dont tell me what i do wrong, then i cant get better..
You dont know the deal with sajjad.. Him and Axe d are on my dick cos of rain matrix's thread- I told sajjad not to tell some one they should just quit rapping... what the fuck kina feed is that?? So he's in here hating on me & mine cos i told him off....

fair enough i aint been on the past couple of days so i dunno whats been happening


anywae imma stop goin off topic now

[B.A.D.]

Him and Axe d are on my dick cos of rain matrix's thread-

there you go again with that shit...

u had enough yet?