Chet Starr - Runs In The Family

[Robbie G]

I like it. The beat went with the song and the concept and lyrics were good.

Good work.

[<Stiiccy>]

well homie your gettin better....
before i say anything...you need to get a better mic, you get a better mic and you can get somewhere
i love the beat...
you had some good flow goin there...
the lyrics were simple as fuck..but were very real and i respect you for that...
the hook could have been better ...it could have been like ,
"with this pen and this pad i write the story of my life
havent gone far but atleast i tried"

somthin along those lines

your delivery is prolly your best thing goin right now...your not afraid to rap and your not just talking on the mic...so keep that up...

im not gonna rate this track...but im just gonna say keep it up cuzz you have a future if you get a better mic...and keep doin what your doin.....

good job bro

[<Stiiccy>]

thanks man, but this is just my hobby

so i think my $20 mic is good enough

lol ight

[Emadyville]

Def not bad, put more of yourself into it though and you be good.

[Robbie G]

You really got a son?

[B.A.D.]

the track has a nice vibe

but the lyrics are strong and good, very very interesting story throughout the track, I enjoyed it pretti much, you have no flaws in writting

only thing u need to work on is
-delivery
-flow

but practice makes the master

also a cool quality would sound nice

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

yea its nice....flow is stabil at times but at times u went off aswell...need to show more confidence and yea a bit more emotions wouldnt hurt
quality of course...we all struggle wit that
but lyrics are fine ...vibe is great too...(as ax-d said)
keep it up

[Big Proof 4ever]

well i aint gonna lie to u,i didnt like it,just dont take it wrong i just dont feel it,ur improving but still have to practice,good luck man

[Rain Matrix]

well I felt emotion... I noticed flow... but something seems off...
u had some good lines so keep at it yur far from tha worst I've ever heard