Lollipop remix

[DelinQuent]

most of you gonna hate this, but i had to do it. song is hot right now, it'll get me a lot of plays on soundclick lol. and i personally love the song.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_so ... ID=6438375

lyrics for my parts

pretty mama had a face so fine
she even had an ass to match so fine/
she knows what i like, lil mama got me dyin/
like slavery i'ma have to make mama mine/
and man i ain't never, seen none like herr/
that pussy in my mouth had me so bonkers/
i told her slow it down lik sloow sloow/
made her speed it up like go go

shorty say the faggot that she with ain't shit/
shorty say the faggot that she with ain't me/
shorty say the faggot that she with cain't flip/
but shawty i'm flip it flip it like i cant quit/
get him dismissed, and make it fast/
i aint' stayin long so make it stat/
just like another bitch youre makin me mad/
but you doj g what i say because i like that

[Block]

ah man..... i was looking to feed some shit, but man i cant even feed this lol. i guess your part was ok for what it is but totally not my style.

you got kinda off beat in parts, and it kinda sounded like you just woke up lol. i dunno if that was meant to be that way though

[<Stiiccy>]

damn dude umm 1 tip try not dubbing your whole verse...just dubb certain parts...
but it was a cool remake i guess...your voice didnt fit the song though...no offence to your voice..it just didnt sound good with the beat and shit

im not gonna rate this song...just listen to my tips

[DelinQuent]

i'm not upping to zshare lol.

i didn't wanna dub certain parts since it was kinda singing and the dubs woulda just made it sound odd, i tried to dub certain spots but it came out weird. about being off beat, i can't see how i was off beat, unless lil wayne went off beat too since i COMPLETELY replicated his flow for this song. and as for my voice, i agree, doesn't fit the beat lol. and this isn't my style either, just felt like doing a track today. literally written and recorded in under and hour lol

thanks a bunch for feeding guys.

[B.A.D.]

oh man sick remix

lyrics are shit, but works 100% fine for this one

the
"shorty say the faggot that she with ain't shit/
shorty say the faggot that she with ain't me/
shorty say the faggot that she with cain't flip/"
parts
are singed real nice, I mean... reaall nice... good job on that

haha not my favourite from you, but I enjoyed it... matta fact listened to it a couple times

quality def, perfect... and the remix job itself its real good...

nice track

[DelinQuent]

good to see ya enjoyed it as simply a remix track. I wasn't going for lyricism, I was going for replication. Thanks.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

dude...worst song...at least i can say u killed wayne but nuttin near ur best...fo real...i didnt like the beat and the idea at all...sorry...just aint feelin it
sorry..heard better stuff from you

[Kez]

Hated it, sorry.

You can say you weren't going for lyricism and were doing it to cash in on the hype of this track, but to me that is the problem with what most of the mainstream artists today.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

Hated it, sorry.

You can say you weren't going for lyricism and were doing it to cash in on the hype of this track, but to me that is the problem with what most of the mainstream artists today.

agreed


i also just lost alot of respect i had for your other tracks man, selling out is gay

[Speech]

Hated it, sorry.

You can say you weren't going for lyricism and were doing it to cash in on the hype of this track, but to me that is the problem with what most of the mainstream artists today.

agreed


i also just lost alot of respect i had for your other tracks man, selling out is gay

oh well i wouldn critizize him for out-selling on this ONE track..if he done an album like that, i feel ya..but i think he did this track for himself basicly....well wasn my taste tho..but i'd like to see a rmx of this song...maybe by some rappers that put a lil diff to the track, as long as weezy part gets cut out hahaha

hmm won't feed much but telling you that your singin was ok, but not hitting me off my chair for sho
but if you have fun with doing trax like that do it, you gotta do what you like...and true what bar said there is waaaayyy beter dq-shit out..fo sheezy

holla

[Kez]

^ No i'm not critising him, haha i know his other stuff is good

Just critising this track

[Tash8]

pretty wack man, the past 2 tracks i've kinda lost a lot of respect for you

[DelinQuent]

so you lose respect, because i choose to have fun with my music.

i'm gonna get serious right now. i'm not a lyrical cat, i'm about making music, song is hot right now, in my eyes, it's a hot song. not my version, i'm not riding my own dick, but i love wayne's version. my last track, "i'm so sick" was a throwaway track. if you guys haven't noticed, lyrics do not get you noticed. what gets you noticed these days is either a dance track, or something that people can relate to. lately i've been sick of writing love tracks and depressing songs, so i just wanted to break my norm and throw out a few garbage tracks. i'm not sayin you gotta feel me on these ones, i'm just saying i'm doing these for me, so when i go back to the serious things i can feel fresh.

but all in all i wanna thank everyone for simply listening and giving their feed, wether i didn't agree with your feed or not, i listen and take in the negitives and attempt to improve upon the lows. so sincerely thanks to everyone who gave me feed.

[Tash8]

no, u can experiment all you want, i just htought both ur last tracks were pretty bad, making me loose the respect you had for doing good tracks. it's simple math.. u make 2 good tracks and it will cover up for these bad ones.

[DelinQuent]

i'll make sure i do that lol