Bar Vs Official BlueBoys(Bar Wins 3-0 ko)

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6 lines
3-0 ko
4-1 tko
5 votes winner
Tie Votes give one vote each

Breakdown cats

FLOW
STRUCTURE
PUNCHES
MULTIES
RHYMES
VOCAB
COMPLEXITY
NAMEPLAY
OTHER



ill drop in 15 min

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The Initial New Noise From Superficial Blue Boys.
Gay, Like i Knew There Wish, Thrall To Boys

Goin On Track With Linkin Park you aint Thinking smart must be the dirnking cart
i Grab your Sinking heart And Like your tracks hope the beat dont start

I leave you black and blue boy you just my wack then chew toy i crack a new ploy
there aint no way back or to joy less you go back to when you smack then blew boys




Thrall - someone held in bondage/holding someone in bondage

linking park - he has a track sampling linking park

last punch, coz i dunno bout laungage barriers, but if you blew boys it means giving them blowjobs

everything is straight forward so ya'll should get it

[Jay_LP1]

yo listen to me BAR , I'm gonna put you in a JAR
throw it in trash where dog piss in it with a straw

look at your flaws , YOUR RHYMES are like a fart
hate all the gays? , SNOAR CHIMES as you depart

right from the very start , you were just like a MITRE
i'm gonna hold you from ur ass and RAISE MY LIGHTER

first four lines are pretty much clear I think

Mitre - A thong for binding the hair, worn by women in ancient Greece . You can check its pronunciation anywhere.
Raise my lighter - refers to his song with C-Riz(sarcasticly). Somewhat like eminem do with Shook ones in 8 mile with papa Doc . Dunno if I did it correctly lol

And yeah I'd tried to do some multies in the 3rd and 4th line . Do tell me if it was correct coz I'm a real noob when it comes to multi and stuff. I'm still learning.

[Tornado]

Bar for me, he had more of a flow, more mutli that linked the lines well and more sting

"I leave you black and blue boy you just my wack then chew toy i crack a new ploy"

that was the killer line

FLOW: Bar. OBB's was jagged
STRUCTURE: pretty even but OBBs was clearer
PUNCHES: Bar, especially for the line above^
MULTIES: Bar. His lines were full of them
RHYMES:Bar. I think he had 3 rhyming words per line
VOCAB: I dunno. pretty even
COMPLEXITY: Bar, OBB's one was basic
NAMEPLAY:Bar - OBB's one was a bit simple compared to Bar's
OTHER: i dunno what else to say other that i think OBB lost it with the first 4 lines

Tell me if you want me to expand on any point. sorri for that

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^ thanx


OBB if you want tornado's vote to be broken down more, then ill not count it, i dont want people thinking im using my mod powers to help me win votes lol and i usually ask for break downs unless both battlers are happy with the explinations

[Jay_LP1]

yeah I think more explanation on the vote would be cool

[Jay_LP1]

VOTE PEOPLE

[Xray]

lmao Official BlueBoys what the fuck was that? shittest lyrics i've witnessed on this site so far listen bar im gonna put u in a jar WACK!!

bar you destroyed him, dont need explain since blue boy's lyrics are simple as fuck

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2-0



@sajjad, you got to break the vote down more than that for it to count, dont want people complaining on hate voting or anything.


thanx for voting guys

[Tash8]

i'm not breaking down shit, count it or don't

but blueboys, that was an embarrassment.

bar yours wasn't great either but you had some nice multis and nice flow, a few decent punchlines here and there.

so u win bar.

[Jay_LP1]

with all due respect I accept ur reviews

Bar won I guess

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

i'm not breaking down shit, count it or don't

but blueboys, that was an embarrassment.

bar yours wasn't great either but you had some nice multis and nice flow, a few decent punchlines here and there.

so u win bar.

yeh first text battle in a long time lol thanx for voting


anywae, good battle OBB