Tournament 1st Round: 2v3n vs. OBB

[Robbie G]

FLOW: Blue
STRUCTURE: Blue
PUNCHES: Blue
MULTIES:Blue
RHYMES: Blue (Some sven lines that I couldn't get to rhyme)
VOCAB:Blue
COMPLEXITY: Blue
NAMEPLAY: Tie
OTHER: Blue, he had some lines I enjoyed.

clock's doin tick tock , makin your whole confidence sway
that death cap on your rhymes is killin hiphop day by day

[C-Game]

i was wonderin why the hell u were votin for ur self.. i will vote in a bit...

and i will change the topic title..

[Robbie G]

i dont get why everyone sayin my lines aint rhyming ..
ill quit this battle board shit and stick to real rapping right after this tournament

1st 2 lines: personality-ability (rhymes in my opininion)
2nd 2 lines: out-house (okay i admit that isnt completely rhyming but when you flow it it sounds rhyming tho)
3rd 2 lines: blood-hood (if you tell me that isnt rhyming your retarded)
last 2 lines: mickey d-happy meal (rhymes too)

now tell me what lines arent rhyming?

2nd and third still don't rhyme for me. Not saying that they don't rhyme when say them..I just can't get them too.

[IceAxe]

FLOW - Blue
STRUCTURE - Blue, but both could've been improved
PUNCHES - Blue - had more direct punches
MULTIES - Blue for sure
RHYMES - Blue -- 2v3n hardly rhymed at all
VOCAB - tie
COMPLEXITY - tie
NAMEPLAY - Blue
OTHER( enjoyment ,metaphores , creativity anythin u can think off) - Blue

bringing it to 2-0 total

[Jay_LP1]

Thanks for the votes

good battle sven

[alter]

bit late but both of you need major elevation
dude no. 1 was talking crap and wasn't battling. plus the rhyming was weak

dude no. 2 was talking crap "rhyme miles blocked"?? make sense.. rhyme miles CLOCKED mighta been more coherent, but eh...
however his verse was more of a battle verse... what tourney is this btw?
what's the prize?
can i get in?

[alter]

^If there's a no show can i jump in?
PM me iff so.

[Jay_LP1]

bit late but both of you need major elevation
dude no. 1 was talking crap and wasn't battling. plus the rhyming was weak

dude no. 2 was talking crap "rhyme miles blocked"?? make sense.. rhyme miles CLOCKED mighta been more coherent, but eh...
however his verse was more of a battle verse... what tourney is this btw?
what's the prize?
can i get in?

It is crimes miles blocked not rhyme

anyways thanks for the feed

[alter]

^My mistake, sometimes i read shit too quickly, Alas! i must stand by what I said, even with this amendment.
"Crime Miles Blocked" still is a bit incoherent in my books, granted poetic liberty with syntax does allow for different wordings and choice of words in rap, I don't feel that rhymes like that are good to include. This isn't a personal shot at you however, as I know/knew/know of many "veteran" and "dope" emcees who do this, it's just a pet peeve of mine.

[Jay_LP1]

no prob man , that is your view and I respect it

[alter]

Props to you dude.
Close this lol?