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Re: The verse that made you say WOW

Postby Infinite2 » Jun 7th, '08, 13:08

I used to say I never met a girl like you before
Still ain't got a fuckin clue as to who you truly are
Almost went as far as introducin you to my daughters
'til you went as far as goin and snoopin through my drawers
Now I just feel stupid for the loop that you threw me for
Can't believe I almost flew the coop for some stupid whore
You used to say all you wanted was for me to be yours
All I ever wanted from you was a few booty calls
If you recall I used to treat you like a groupie broad
When we fucked I refused to even take my jewelry off
But it threw me off the first time I called and you blew me off
It was a shock, it struck me as odd, but it turned me on
You started gettin moody on me, pretty soon we'd argue
And the ruder you got, the more beautiful you got to me

And whoulda even knew that, who woulda even thought possibly
Cupid could shoot another one of them God damned darts at me
It's true that I got shot in the heart
But when someone seems too good to be true, they usually are
But see, when you're in it it's too hard to see

'til you pull up and see some other dude's car parked and reach
{*click*} up under the seat as your heart starts to beat
Before you make a decision that's life altering
And just as you halt and you turn and you start to leave
You hear them words echoing, almost haunting, that taunting ring


It's a great verse, but song is not overall that good because of Obie, Stat and Fif'... :n:
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Re: The verse that made you say WOW

Postby Kosovic » Jun 7th, '08, 13:09

Evan C. wrote:Anohter ridiculous Em verse...

Hahaha! Gimme the mic, let me recite, 'til Timothy White
pickets outside the Interscope offices every night
What if he's right? I'm just a criminal, makin a living
off of the world's misery - what in the world gives me the right
to say what I like, and walk around flippin the bird
Livin the urban life, like a white kid from the 'burbs
Dreamin at night of screamin at mom, schemin to leave
Run away from home and grow to be as evil as me
I just want you all to notice me and people to see
that somewhere deep down, there's a decent human being in me
It just can't be found, so the reason you've been seeing this me
is cause this is me now, the recent dude who's being this mean
So when you see me, dressin up like a nerd on TV
or heard the CD usin the fag word so freely
it's just me being me, here want me to tone it down?
Suck my fuckin dick, you faggot
You happy now? Look here


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Re: The verse that made you say WOW

Postby Cwayon_Murder » Jun 7th, '08, 18:00

Since we were talking about collabs I thought I might mention Em's verse on It Has Been Said. I haven't seen it mentioned here at all since I joined :O

Ih.. ih, ih (it has been)
It has been, it has been, it has been
It has been said, that there has been known to be bloodshed
Over bread, men who have bled to death, dead {what?}
Strapped to beds, pipe bombs, dynamite, lead
Money power respect, street cred, yeah
It's scary ain't it? Picture yourself goin out as a hero {uhh}
Picture mural pictures of us painted all over street corners
Fans meet to mourn us, while we meet the coroners
Notorious tried to warn us
We watched, so many Biggie backed off of {ha ha ha}
Biggie's back and 'Pac's, landmarks, history in rap
Statistically in fact; it's so sad to see us re-enact
these tragic events, which lead us back
To where we left off on March 9th
To come from such hard knock lifes
And make it up out of 'em, hit the spotlights
And, once they're on us this is our lives
Thrust out for all eyes to cast upon us
to see who can last the longest
And he who lasts the longest, must be the strongest {uh-huh}
In this concrete jungle, where this dog eat dog mentality comes from
It's origin, which is usually originated from cats who starvin
Or it could just be somebody's horror, that just horri-fies
And applies to his persona or the sizes
in his entou-rage, that intimidates the people
To the point that you know that he's gangster
He ain't just say shit, you just believe it


It's one of my favorites.
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Re: The verse that made you say WOW

Postby Evan C. » Jun 8th, '08, 08:14

Kosovic wrote:
Evan C. wrote:Anohter ridiculous Em verse...

Hahaha! Gimme the mic, let me recite, 'til Timothy White
pickets outside the Interscope offices every night
What if he's right? I'm just a criminal, makin a living
off of the world's misery - what in the world gives me the right
to say what I like, and walk around flippin the bird
Livin the urban life, like a white kid from the 'burbs
Dreamin at night of screamin at mom, schemin to leave
Run away from home and grow to be as evil as me
I just want you all to notice me and people to see
that somewhere deep down, there's a decent human being in me
It just can't be found, so the reason you've been seeing this me
is cause this is me now, the recent dude who's being this mean
So when you see me, dressin up like a nerd on TV
or heard the CD usin the fag word so freely
it's just me being me, here want me to tone it down?
Suck my fuckin dick, you faggot
You happy now? Look here


Not good enough.
You kidding?

"Run away from home and grow to be as evil as me
I just want you all to notice me and people to see
that somewhere deep down, there's a decent human being in me
It just can't be found, so the reason you've been seeing this me
is cause this is me now, the recent dude who's being this mean"

RI-DIC-U-LOUS.
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Re: The verse that made you say WOW

Postby Evan C. » Jun 8th, '08, 08:22

Chet wrote:^^^well five lines doesn't make a verse good

and Kosovic is here to make people mad lol

and X killed everyone in that song :worship:

the whole verse is only 17 lines long...5 lines is about a 3rd of it...

Plus, it isn't like the rest of the verse is bad. It's actually very sick. And no...Xzibit didn't kill anyone. He is an ok emcee but he kinda struggles when trying to convey a message and his flow isn't really that impressive.
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Re: The verse that made you say WOW

Postby Evan C. » Jun 8th, '08, 08:26

Oh yeah, and there are more rhymes I missed in that verse. human being/you've been seeing/dude who's being
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Re: The verse that made you say WOW

Postby Xray » Jun 8th, '08, 09:55

yoshi wrote:My songs can make you cry, take you by surprise
And at the same time, make you dry your eyes with the same rhyme

See what you're seeing is a genius at work
Which to me isn't work, so it's easy to misinterpret it at first,
Cuz when i speak, it's tongue in cheek
I'd yank my fuckin teeth before id ever bite my tongue
I'd slice my gums, get struck by fuckin' lightning twice at once
And die and come back as vanilla ice's son
And walk around the rest of my life spit on
And kicked and hit with shit, every time i sung
Like R Kelly as soon as "bump n' grind" comes on

More pain inside of my brain, than the eyes of a little girl inside of a
plane
Aimed at the World Trade
, standin' on Ronnie's grave,
Screaming at the sky, till clouds gather as Clyde Mathers and Bonnie Jade
And thats pretty much the gist of it,Parents are pissed, but the kids love
it
Nine millimeter, heater stashed, in two-seaters with meat cleavers
I don't blame you, i wouldn't let hailie listen to me neither

thats fucken ill, never knew that track had lyrics that good, wow :o did i answer your question kosovic?
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I speak literally, figuratively, the prophet gone


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Re: The verse that made you say WOW

Postby threeandtwenty » Jun 8th, '08, 10:01

liked all his freestyle verses better than his mainstream stuff...in terms of rhyme not content.
whose arm is this?..i must've cut it off at the pharmacist
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Re: The verse that made you say WOW

Postby yoshi » Jun 8th, '08, 10:59

Xray wrote:thats fucken ill, never knew that track had lyrics that good, wow :o did i answer your question kosovic?


i know it's ill. i didn't like the song at first, but then i thought i'd give it a chance. it's crazy, especially the WTC line.
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Re: The verse that made you say WOW

Postby theJFKshow » Jun 10th, '08, 03:24

If I could capture the rage of today's youth and bottle it
Crush the glass from my bare hands and swallow it
Then spit it back in the faces of you racists
and hypocrites who think the same shit but don't say shit
You Liberace's, Versace's, and you nazis
Watch me, cause you thinking you got me in this hot seat
You motherfuckers wanna JUDGE me cause you're NOT me
You'll never STOP me, I'm TOP speed as you POP me
I came to save these new generations of babies
from parents who failed to raise 'em cause they're lazy
to grow to praise me I'm makin 'em go crazy
That's how I got this whole nation to embrace me
And you fugazi if you think I'ma admit wrong
I cripple any hypocritic critic I'm sic'd on
And this song is for any kid who gets picked on
A sick song to retaliate to, and it's called..


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Re: The verse that made you say WOW

Postby Emadyville » Jun 10th, '08, 22:05

I think we could all post a verse from almost every song, from almost every collab, and almost every verse he has spit while on some D12 shit, and from how everyone is going at diff songs and shit, looks we can all conclude dude is just sick.
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Re: The verse that made you say WOW

Postby Jeffxf » Jul 15th, '08, 07:26

All of rabbit run... a verse that long come on nowww
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