Hayzi response..

[xariuss]

This is a response to hayzi claiming i didnt acutally "freestyle" and i was to "laid back for it" .. sif..


http://s9.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2WO3S ... 638T2EMASB (beat version.. sounds shit random beat, orignally was raw spit)

http://s9.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=0PYIL ... STMGV5O009 (accpella.. original raw spit)

well i did it raw asual, but some people dont like it raw so i mixed a random beat into it, both accapella and beat version r there..

[SoniK]

ur tryna sound like Eminem too much man

[xariuss]

Eminem? wtf.. i'm not trying to sound like him.. but ill take it as a complement..

oh wait wait, maybe i am.. here's a rhyme

i sold my soul the the devil, why won't he pay me
i look at my self in the mirror and all i see is hayley
baby, don't cry don't do this
not new to this
freestyling with proof to come up through this
life of pain and shame through me
picked up a gun and knew the words were the only
way to express my words are get them to know me...

cough cough.. sarcasticc

[AspirinE]

Ummm.... Try harder

[xariuss]

Ummm.... Try harder

you wanna rephrase that? and actually state what you trying to say??

maybe a sophisticated response?.. espically from a forum moderator.. sif

[AspirinE]

This is definately not a good enough diss

u have little wordplay and show almost no skill

all i heard was a verbal insult with a few rhyming words


so i think .... Try Harder should actually mean something to u

[xariuss]

now a respose like that is alot better, and yes i know the "rhymes" etc weren't good at all.. it was a freestyle.. i'm not very "good" at freestyling yet

it was off of the top.. not pre-written..

[AspirinE]

now a respose like that is alot better, and yes i know the "rhymes" etc weren't good at all.. it was a freestyle.. i'm not very "good" at freestyling yet

Just try to spend more time writing ... before responding with disses lol
but i can see ur tryin so keep up the work


Try to make a storrytelling rap .. to get u some practice

[xariuss]

maybe u shud record ur self freestyling.. and show me an example.. and i dont meen pre-written, i meen off the top..

[AspirinE]

maybe u shud record ur self freestyling.. and show me an example.. and i dont meen pre-written, i meen off the top..

I dont freestyle... i simply cant

English aint my native language ... but that doesnt mean i dont know wat it should sound like


but ull hear a track from me soon

[xariuss]

ha, yeah ok sure.. till i hear u freestyle better then me, and spit something better then what i posted... even if it is shit... i won't take ur opinion to heart, anyways im off to bed, i got an english exam tomorrow.. 11:47pm here, sunday

[AspirinE]

ha, yeah ok sure.. till i hear u freestyle better then me, and spit something better then what i posted... even if it is shit... i won't take ur opinion to heart, anyways im off to bed, i got an english exam tomorrow.. 11:47pm here, sunday

Iahgt ill give it a try LOL

[$0 R3@L]

still cant right more then five bars

[Coccoa]

Xarrius would you mind stop dissing so much?? Why you claim other people's skills? I ve heard your freestyle, it's ok, but for christ sake, lay off the battle shit a bit. You wanna see your verses on a song? I send you beats, you rap something WRITTEN on them, send me the aca. See how things work?

[xariuss]

Yeah man that wud be hot, im only dissing because people have the nerv and the audacity to question peoples word.. and yes 5 bars, after that i have trouble freestyling and normally get mixed up, im still working on it, but now to work on songs ^^

plus, this is in rap battles right?