Darkblade VS Toy Soldier[VOTE]

[Darkblade44431]

ehh..first battle. not really into battling on the net, but i'm bored, so whatever.
I'll post somethin sometime. This is a 10-15 line battle.
edit:
hey toy soldier wanna battle, then ya better hold your bladder
'for i let loose with this tattle, you use senselessness for battle
misinterpret me as asshole, gettin tackled for the hassle
i don't need the guns to kill you, got the armed words instilled in you
make your blood come out still blue, before it got a chance to lose
bodily fluids through, your system that is screwed
don't try to diss me back, spit flew from what you spat
is what i'm seein at...E-gangster central..make sure that you are strapped
but not with guns, make sure your words are ones that make us stunned
cuz guns don't help on websites, you don't know where this is done
and let me finish this.. with a fact i'd like to list
internet, reality, two different things that crowd at me
and if you think they are the same and all right in your head, you might as well add in to sane your mind was over dead.

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EDIT: whoops...umm....Votes will be best out of 6 i guess.

[The Toy Soldier]

Sorry I took so long i was washing the dishes
i didnt know wanting to get schooled were ur wishes
tattle in a battle? i call those fucking faggots snitches
dont get mad cuz i stalled i was doing chores
ur ryhmes are worse than the cheapest whores
dont be hastey i got ryhmes here comes more
ill be burning you on here cooking you like smores
strapped?no dildos here i never wore
haha ur useless raps make me bored
E-gangster?youd expect me to be black
i may leave for awhile but ill be back
dont come to me talkin some smack
yeah ill act tough even though i look white
ill get my Darkblade and stab you in the light
Toy Soldier For the Win I didnt need to put up a fight

honestly i was doing chores.

[Darkblade44431]

Nice job man. Good luck.

[Solace]

FLOW - Toy Soldier
STRUCTURE - Toy Soldier
PUNCHES - Darkblade
MULTIES - Darkblade
RHYMES - Darkblade
VOCAB - Darkblade
COMPLEXITY - Darkblade
NAMEPLAY - Toy Soldier
OTHER - Toy Soldier

Seems darkblade won, mainly because of his use of multies and the good diction he used But i overall myself thought it was a tie. Good job both of you.

5-4 Darkblade wins.

[Enimee]

wow that was pretty even keel

FLOW - Toy Soldier
PUNCHES - n/a
RHYMES - Darkblade
VOCAB - Darkblade
COMPLEXITY - Darkblade
NAMEPLAY - Toy Soldier
OTHER - Toy Soldier

cudnt really pull any punches out of either verses so yeah

cud battle tho keep at it both of ya

[Darkblade44431]

umm...could you please say who you voted for. Because we each got 3 from you, enimee.
and thanks.

[Vettori]

FLOW - Darkblade But ur writing structure gets Lost
PUNCHES - None of you really used any
RHYMES - Darkblade
VOCAB - Darkblade, But i can see some forced lines. and missin words lol
COMPLEXITY - Darkblade
NAMEPLAY - Toy Soldier

Darkblade Get my vote. But You both need to up ur Material.
Personals are always a bonus. But none of you had any..Before a battle Dig up some dirt on ur opponent....In the end, its not so much for the people voting, Unless they Understand the personal...But when youve hit him with something That hurts...hell notice it

Just be more prepared is my verdict. Take some time to be creative

Nice battle guys

[SkinNBlista]

I read this the other day but neva voted
Darkblade 2 me u win coz Toysoldiers comeback wasnt as harsh

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

I read this the other day but neva voted
Darkblade 2 me u win coz Toysoldiers comeback wasnt as harsh

got to break your vote down into cats or a paragraph explaining why you vote for who you do.

[MoBrat]

Darkblade gets enimees vote n so does Toy Soldier right? cause dont a vote thats a split like enimees count as 1 vote each or did that rule stop since i've been gone

Flow -- TS
Structure -- TS
Wordplay -- Tie cause i cant say 1 or the other on this 1
Punches -- Tie
Rhymes -- DB
Multies -- DB
Other(enjoyment, creativity, etc..) -- DB

OVERALL -- 5-4 Darkblade