Can't Live Without You - DFG - Please Comment

[dfg]

Hey people, I'm sat here bored so I just thought I'd write a lil som'in of top of my head and make it up as I go along, Tell me what you think.

Peace
DFG

Sittin here alone tryin to figure it out
Where'd it all go wrong? What we fightin about?
I use to think we were made for each other like we're Bonnie & Clyde
Now all I see is the pain that's building up inside
Coz ever since I lost you shit's just not the same
It seem's like you was playing me like I'm just a game
I tried to tell you I love you and we'd get trough it together
Like when you was tellin me we'd be together forever
But now you've gone and you're never coming back
Me without you's like a junkie without smack
Coz I crave you I worship you I need you to survive
You're the reason for my being you're the reason I'm alive
Now you're the reason that I'm dyin it's like I've lost the will to live
You're the reason that I'm cryin coz I jus can't forgive
All the pain you put me through it's like you're messin with my head
If I can't live without you I may aswell just be dead!

[Kosovic]

On the other hand...i CAN live without you. And i can LEAVE without you. No pun intended....or was it?

*jumps out*

Put more emotion in it next time.

[dfg]

Sound Will Do Pal Still Not Like I Put Much Thought In Or Anything
It Was Just Sommin Off The Top of My Head.
Back To The Whole Emotion Thing...
Thats What My Freestyles Are All Bout Man,
I Can't Just Come Up With Shit There And Then
And Write A Full 16 Bars In Like 2 Mins,
That Was Going On Emotion..
99% Of My Freestyles Are Going On The Emotions I'm Feelin At The Time,
Don't Neserseraly Mean I'm Puttin The Emotion Into It,
Just Usin It To Think And Let The Emotions Write The Rap...

[Solace]

I really liked it Flowed well to me in my head. Glad to read some other stuff you post later on

[Kosovic]

Right ok....but at least post something when i am not here, i want it to take me by surprise no homo.

[Arabian Shady]

thats was well crafted bro,flowed nicely
as i was readin it ,the piece started to sound a bit like fort minor's "where'd you go",i mean emotion wise,get what i mean?? its the same concept,is it how u planned it??
all in all,its kool
peace

[dfg]

Well, I Didn't Exepect That Reaction LOL
Thanks Guys

Shadymademe - I'll Holla At You When I Get More Stuff Up

Aribian Shady - Yeah Man I Know Exactly what You Mean But What Do You Mean By 'Is That How I Planned it?'

Kosovic - What You Mean Post When You're Not here?? N Wtf U On Bout...'No Homo'??

[Kosovic]

Dont ask, i dont make sense usually.

oioi

[dfg]

HAHA Okii

[Kosovic]

oioi

[Arabian Shady]

what i meant was ,did u take that song as a source for topic and like decide that its was a good concept to write a frestyle on?
hope u get it
peace

[dfg]

Erm, No, All I Did Was Open A New Topic
And Went On How I Was Feelin At The Time, As You Can (Possibly) Tell I Was Pretty Down At The Time, And Shit Was Goin On Between Me And My Girlfriend So That's What Came Out...
When I'd Wrote The Freestyle I Named It 'Can't Live Without You - DFG - Please Comment'
Same With All My Freestyles I Write On Here :y: