Upcoming track with kez and xray

[<VerbalTouch>]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/15964951d1ba5141/

This this is ma best

[Xray]

haha shit man sounds like your a whole new improved rapper. flow and delivery is much much better i can hear the emotional aswell crazy. concept and lyrics are ill to man. beat is unique as fuck lol aint heard anything like it good find love the mixing too man suits the beat alot

your last audios: 1-3 out of 10
this audio: 7-8 out of 10

[<VerbalTouch>]

thanks alot bro lookin forward to yous and kez's verses

[Tornado]

yo, i aint checked out your old stuff, but i noticed when you rap you have a little breath control problem, like i can hear it every time you stop, also found it a bit hard to hear the lyrics clearly but it sounds like your coming along, keep it up

[<VerbalTouch>]

thanks man

[steelcity20010]

yo, i aint checked out your old stuff, but i noticed when you rap you have a little breath control problem, like i can hear it every time you stop, also found it a bit hard to hear the lyrics clearly but it sounds like your coming along, keep it up

i agree with tornado get the breath thing under control and u could have something there

[<Stiiccy>]

yeah control your breathing...
take a deep breath before you record
anyway, you have shown so much improvement i cant say im not proud of you
beat is tiight man
the lyrics at the start are kinda funny lol
but good job man
keep it up

[<VerbalTouch>]

About the breathing I recorded the whole verse so thats porbably why I should of tried punch ins

[DelinQuent]

i have this beat lol

delivery and emotion is solid.

rhymes were eh, you tried, but sometimes it sounded like you were trying to hard.

flow was verrrrry choppy and off in spots.

compared to your other shit this is amazing lol

as sajjad said, you went from a 1-3 to about a 6-7 in my book. good shit man, glad to see you improving.

[<VerbalTouch>]

Thanks bro

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

yeah ur flow was very messy and rhymes were forced
Dq actually summed it up pretty much
keep it up

[<VerbalTouch>]

Yup the finished version is gonna be crazy wait for it (Y)