Tornado - Black Bandit

[Tornado]

http://www.myspace.com/tornadothestorm
this is just a extra track from a new project i'm doing, didn't really feel its my best but didn't want to waste it. I just wanted to see how my flow/pronouciation/lyrics have come. Also feed the actual beat please, it was done by me.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

our pronouncation is coming along man, still not great but getting better i understand it coz im from uk so its easy for me but i can tell it aint clear ya know, but it is a definite improvement, lyrics were nice, flow was weird, your were on beat, but the beat wasnt good

i think tis dope that you wanne use uk style beats but there aint alot of good instrumentals goin around ya know.


nice work though keep it up

[<Stiiccy>]

hmm
i liked this it was very original
its hard to understand what you say...thats your main problem right now
delivery is good
flow is good
beat was good
i liked the hook alot man
keep it up

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

flow was allright
beat was pretty unique...
but yeah ur pronouncation is the main problem
keep workin on that

[Tornado]

thnx 4 da comments yall keep em comin
@Bar: you know any places to get uk instrumentals?.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

thnx 4 da comments yall keep em comin
@Bar: you know any places to get uk instrumentals?.

nah i dont man, but not through lack of looking, ive did searches before, even on soundclick tryna find uk producers but its solid tryna get anything decent

[KDEWolf]

mix is garbage. and u need to enunciate

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

mix is garbage. and u need to enunciate

absaloutley no point in pointing out something that he acknolwedges in the first post and is asking if he has gotten better at.

[randomghost]

nice track....good flow...beat is ok....u need more power for ur delivery overall ur gettin better man...nice track

[Xray]

beat is weak, pronunciation needs working on, flow needs work to, emotion is on point same with delivery. can't judge the lyrics cause i can't understand what your saying. mixing is horrible too, how much reverb did you add? damn, 100%? from what i heard sounds like you got an ok microphone but the vocals are just poorly mixed.

[Tornado]

nice track....good flow...beat is ok....u need more power for ur delivery overall ur gettin better man...nice track

thnx man

beat is weak, pronunciation needs working on, flow needs work to, emotion is on point same with delivery. can't judge the lyrics cause i can't understand what your saying. mixing is horrible too, how much reverb did you add? damn, 100%? from what i heard sounds like you got an ok microphone but the vocals are just poorly mixed.

mix is garbage. and u need to enunciate

I didn't mix the vocals so don't hate me for that and i dont have a mic either, it was a run down studio, thats why it was just a extra track