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picture me rollin wrote:whats 2marrows headlines? ,dfg is still missing.
For a safe return is what his familys still wishing.
Me like eminems stan thats farfetched.
Thats like me writing how u die on an ectch a sketch.
How r u 1 step ahead and im 10 steps behind .
If i made u think that cuz im the real mastermind.
It takes a tru genius to plan a pefect crime.
At a certain place,date and time.
U must have been mistaken to think i died in the river.
Ill come back cut your ass up n eat u like chopped liver.
Tomorrow's Headlines?? It's not the headlines I'm readin/
I'm reading your gravestone coz I'm the one sucseedin/
farfetched
sketch
It's a picture of me rollin up to your house to hit ya/
carvethesnow wrote:snap on xrays vote
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