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NEW STEVE SPAG - NIRVANA (HOT)

Postby Steve Spag » Aug 7th, '08, 01:43

Just wrote this today to my boy Kaz's beat "Secrets". If you wanna check it out it's at http://www.soundclick.com/kazproductions. Check it out and let me know what ya' think.

I ain't playin' around until the day I reach nirvana//
All you hoes can keep on talkin' 'cause I'm tokin' marijuanna//
Keep on lickin' other cocks and just assume it's not a problem//
'Cause your jaw just keeps on droppin' like the vote counts for Obama//
It's a critical delima, and it keeps on getting hotter//
I am Steven fuckin' Spag, so don't you call me Harry Potter//
I'm addressing this big issue, I ain't pullin' no Osama//
'Cause I got a lot of pride and it's too much for me to swallow//
There's no time you can borrow, it could all be gone tomorrow//
So just stick to what ya' know, and just follow all your morals//
I ain't followin' your orders 'cause you're talkin' like a Corproal//
And you're actin' like a Sargent, but you're really un-important//
The shit you spit is weak, actually it's kinda boring//
And it's puttin' me to sleep, so please don't mind my snoring//
Let me ask you how it feels for you to wake up every morning//
Knowing you can not ignore me, and I'm gettin' more annoying//

Copywright: Steven Spagnuolo 2008

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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - NIRVANA (HOT)

Postby Ka0t1c » Aug 7th, '08, 02:46

ur right, this shit is very catchy... i love it!
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - NIRVANA (HOT)

Postby Steve Spag » Aug 7th, '08, 02:59

Kaotic wrote:ur right, this shit is very catchy... i love it!

Thanks a lot man.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - NIRVANA (HOT)

Postby Kez » Aug 7th, '08, 03:18

Some good lines in there, but i don't really get the Harry Potter reference.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - NIRVANA (HOT)

Postby Steve Spag » Aug 7th, '08, 03:20

Kez wrote:Some good lines in there, but i don't really get the Harry Potter reference.

I wear glasses. When I was younger people would call me Harry Potter 'cause I looked like him, lol. I had the hair and everything.

But thanks, lol.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - NIRVANA (HOT)

Postby Arabian Shady » Aug 7th, '08, 08:49

McMaybe wrote:Pretty dope. I liked it, had some strong lines. I like how you switch the flow up in every verse you post, would make a real diverse/strong album.



i concur bro,sick shit
peace
ArAbIaN ShAdY


We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


FiNd mE At dA "CREATIVE SECTION", I AM ULTIMATE INNOVATION!!
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - NIRVANA (HOT)

Postby Steve Spag » Aug 7th, '08, 10:58

Arabian Shady wrote:
McMaybe wrote:Pretty dope. I liked it, had some strong lines. I like how you switch the flow up in every verse you post, would make a real diverse/strong album.



i concur bro,sick shit
peace

Thanks to both of yous. I appreciate it.
:).

Keeep the feed coming please.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - NIRVANA (HOT)

Postby Steve Spag » Aug 7th, '08, 13:22

Chet wrote:Damn long time no see Steve :smoking:

It was sick, it's amazing how easy it is to write when your high as hell.

The thing i didn't like was the 2nd line...it seems just way to generic like (I'm a cat with a gat) Just seemed below your level...lol I just don't like it lol

great shit tho :worship:

Haha, good hearin' from ya' man. Glad you're back and glad you enjoyed that peice there. I hear what you're sayin' about the 2nd bar though and I agree with ya'. Only thing that popped in my head at the time though, yeeeah I guess that'll happen when you're writting and tokin', lol.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - NIRVANA (HOT)

Postby Robbie G » Aug 7th, '08, 17:22

Dope as usual :y:
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - NIRVANA (HOT)

Postby Steve Spag » Aug 7th, '08, 19:19

Shady Babie wrote:Dope as usual :y:

Merci :)
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - NIRVANA (HOT)

Postby Solace » Aug 13th, '08, 07:38

Loved it man :y:

i havent been on trshady for a while, so have you released anyother shit (recorded i mean)?

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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - NIRVANA (HOT)

Postby Steve Spag » Aug 13th, '08, 17:15

shadymademe wrote:Loved it man :y:

i havent been on trshady for a while, so have you released anyother shit (recorded i mean)?

Thanks

Thanks a lot man, I appreciate it.
And yee, I got 2 newer tracks out "Scatter" and "Play Date", they're up on my soundclick and myspace. I'm also gonna try to release something else new this week aswell.

http://www.soundclick.com/stevespag
http://www.myspace.com/stevespag

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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - NIRVANA (HOT)

Postby Solace » Aug 14th, '08, 04:29

Steve Spag wrote:
shadymademe wrote:Loved it man :y:

i havent been on trshady for a while, so have you released anyother shit (recorded i mean)?

Thanks

Thanks a lot man, I appreciate it.
And yee, I got 2 newer tracks out "Scatter" and "Play Date", they're up on my soundclick and myspace. I'm also gonna try to release something else new this week aswell.

http://www.soundclick.com/stevespag
http://www.myspace.com/stevespag

:)


Yeah i listened to Scatter like right when it was released

Play Date, ill check that out for sure. Im sure itll be awesome.
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