Practise

[<VerbalTouch>]

I didnt write these lyrics first off, I was just practicing my spits so yeah may suck a bit

http://www.zshare.net/audio/16886438b6ca3197/

[KDEWolf]

alittle to much reading

[Xray]

alittle to much reading

word, was cool but hardly flowed on beat.

[MoBrat]

i agree with both A) 2 much reading B) not good flow n upp the damn beat i cant hear shit but u the beat is just a small faded sound in the backround
my advice stick 2 ur own shit or record shit u know like jay-z or em(or who ever u like) lyrics over one of there beats 2 get ur flow down then try again cause im tell u no bullshit this aint good keep at it

[<VerbalTouch>]

THe beat was never mixed in it properly the headphones record the beat when i listen to it as well for some reason

[MoBrat]

how do u record...like what program n such?

[<VerbalTouch>]

Adobe Auditions I just plug my mic in to my pc and go.

[MoBrat]

ic i use cool edit pro 2 to record my vocals and windows media player to play the beat so it only records my vocals maybe thats y u got the beat in the backround ...that or u got a shitty mic n no headphones