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Wordplay Workout Pt.1

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Re: Wordplay Workout Pt.1

Postby J Roc » Aug 19th, '08, 23:57

You Aint Nice HAHAHA .... Lmao ..... None Of Your Bars Is Quoteable ....... Elevate Yah Game Kid
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Re: Wordplay Workout Pt.1

Postby J Roc » Aug 20th, '08, 00:04

McMaybe wrote:
J roc wrote:You Aint Nice HAHAHA .... Lmao ..... None Of Your Bars Is Quoteable ....... Elevate Yah Game Kid



Quotable? Nothing you ever wrote was worth a shit dude... If you stop acting like your shits roses you might be able to study up and write a decent line... All your shits generic, at least I'm original...




Seriously.


Lol Thats Yours Thoughts..... You Never Seen Me Go Hard ..... So That Means Your Oppiniun Aint Worth Shit ..... Go On What u know lol ....
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Re: Wordplay Workout Pt.1

Postby <Stiiccy> » Aug 20th, '08, 00:08

seriously mcmaybe this guy can kill you with his wack ass texts :whistle:

hahahahahahahahahahahahqahahahahahahahahahaha
i cant say that with a straight face

j-roc for real homie give up
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Re: Wordplay Workout Pt.1

Postby J Roc » Aug 20th, '08, 00:10

Lol Whatever ....U Guys Keep Ridin Each Other & Sayin Your All Dope :y:

Lol Dude Came Outta No Where & hopped On Maybe Dick :o
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Re: Wordplay Workout Pt.1

Postby <Stiiccy> » Aug 20th, '08, 00:12

J roc wrote:Lol Whatever ....U Guys Keep Ridin Each Other & Sayin Your All Dope :y:

i dont have to say im dope
my dickriders can
ahh it feels good to be better than people
**brushes shoulders off**
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Re: Wordplay Workout Pt.1

Postby J Roc » Aug 20th, '08, 00:17

McMaybe wrote:What i know? Ok dogggggg I'll give you that.

This is what i know, EVERY song or verse you've ever posted here, was exactly the same. Everything is a series of southside generic punchlines that are pointless and really bring nothing to the song itself, You have no structure, lack of flow and your content as the same as every netcee.

That's what i know. Go to sites like rapmusic.com and you'll see 100 kids just like you trying to rap, now go listen to some artists like Apathy, Celph Titled, Necro... All of which started out on the streets. Notice the difference? That's right buddy, they write songs. SONGS, not a series of lines that rhyme.

Learn, then speak. Maybe you have better punchlines than I do, but I write songs... not battle verses.


Lol Ok .... U Write Yah Songs ..... Do Yah Lil Recording Thing .... & When I'm Bored .... I'll Get Ah Rap Battle Goin ........ If u Don't Like Reading My Punchlines .... Wordplay's, & That Shit .... Dont Read It & Hop Off My Dick ....... That's Wuhs Up :wave:
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Re: Wordplay Workout Pt.1

Postby J Roc » Aug 20th, '08, 00:22

Lmao Awww .... First Thing That Came To Mind Was Me Sucking My Dick ...... Hahahaha If That Aint Gay ..... Pssshhtt Lmao ... Fag Praly Still Thinkin About It :o ... Maayybbeee Come Out Tha Closet :'(
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Re: Wordplay Workout Pt.1

Postby <Stiiccy> » Aug 20th, '08, 00:29

McMaybe wrote:
J roc wrote:Lmao Awww .... First Thing That Came To Mind Was Me Sucking My Dick ...... Hahahaha If That Aint Gay ..... Pssshhtt Lmao ... Fag Praly Still Thinkin About It :o ... Maayybbeee Come Out Tha Closet :'(



Hahahaha is that your comeback? Pleeeease, stick to the punchlines buddy.


Your talking to sticcy about arguing on the net? But you call me a fag? What i said was TRUE, you do suck your own dick every thread you post in LOL.

You my friend, are the dumbest motherfucker I have ever encountered. God bless.

lol @ j-roc
i cant stop laughin
hes prolly never even made a song
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Re: Wordplay Workout Pt.1

Postby J Roc » Aug 20th, '08, 00:33

McMaybe wrote:
J roc wrote:Lmao Awww .... First Thing That Came To Mind Was Me Sucking My Dick ...... Hahahaha If That Aint Gay ..... Pssshhtt Lmao ... Fag Praly Still Thinkin About It :o ... Maayybbeee Come Out Tha Closet :'(



Hahahaha is that your comeback? Pleeeease, stick to the punchlines buddy.


Your talking to sticcy about arguing on the net? But you call me a fag? What i said was TRUE, you do suck your own dick every thread you post in LOL.

You my friend, are the dumbest motherfucker I have ever encountered. God bless.


Hahaha Who Started Talking Shit Maybe? Lol I Just Tried To Call It Quits .... But You Came Up With Some Gay Ass Post .... & u Are Ah Faggit Lol ... When Ah Dude Says 'Hop Off My Dick' ... Gay Shit Dont Come To Mind Lol ... I Dont Try To Force It Not Too ... It Just Dosent Lol ...... But You Jus Had Ah Detailed Day Dream My Friend ..... (Naww We Aint Friends ... With Priviledges .. Juss sayin Cause Yah Face Praly Lit Up There For Ah Minute) ....... Lmao Clown You Contradictin Yahself Too lol ....

"Maybe you have better punchlines than I do"
"Nothing you do, ever did, or will ever do can ever compare to me. Period. Nuff said."

Psshht Lol ... Clown, Whenever You Get Bored Of Forum Arguing ... Juss Tell Me lol

& @ Sticcy .... Praly Never Even Made Ah Lower-Decent Line Before ;)
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Re: Wordplay Workout Pt.1

Postby J Roc » Aug 20th, '08, 00:35

Actually Naw Fuckit ..... I Aint Replyin Anymore ... U Guys Keep Posting Though ;)
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Re: Wordplay Workout Pt.1

Postby <Stiiccy> » Aug 20th, '08, 00:41

& @ Sticcy .... Praly Never Even Made Ah Lower-Decent Line Before

well if i havent i know alot of people that LOVE my lines!!
wheres your fans j-roc????
ohh yeah lol
you dont have any!
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Re: Wordplay Workout Pt.1

Postby J Roc » Aug 20th, '08, 00:53

sticcy z wrote:
& @ Sticcy .... Praly Never Even Made Ah Lower-Decent Line Before

well if i havent i know alot of people that LOVE my lines!!
wheres your fans j-roc????
ohh yeah lol
you dont have any!


Fuckit..

My Fans On Ah Different Site Lol .... Where u Think I Got Better Then Everybody Here? Lmao ... Like It Or Not .... Everybody Knows I More Complex Then Them .... Maybe, u, chet ... None Of You Would Fuck With Me In Ah Battle ..... & Tha Fans People More Lyrical Then Tha 1's u Talkina About Lol .... & u ThinkIm 10 ... lol u Enjoy Talking Shit to 10 Year Olds Over Tha Net? Lmao Bitchassness Smh, Buh Ayyee Ohhh ... Im Be Nice .... Quote 1 Nice Line u Ever Said... All i Gotta Say

@ Maybe ...... Lol Flippin Burgers? .... Psshhtt Naw I Know What Im Doing With My Future Lol ... & u Dumb As Hell .... i Aint Tryina "Make It" ...... I'd Be Recording If i Was .... Im Not, So Whats That Tell u? ... u Dumb Ass Hell Nikka, .... I'm Doing Good Right Now :wave:

Lass Post On You Guys ..... I Pwah-Miss :D
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Re: Wordplay Workout Pt.1

Postby <Stiiccy> » Aug 20th, '08, 01:50

Everybody Knows I More Complex Then Them .... Maybe, u, chet ... None Of You Would Fuck With Me In Ah Battle ..... & Tha Fans People More Lyrical Then Tha 1's u Talkina About Lol

how can you say your complex when you dont even know how to structure a rhyme
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Re: Wordplay Workout Pt.1

Postby Robbie G » Aug 20th, '08, 04:43

It wasn't very good., I've seen better drops from you.

why is everyone fighting again?
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Re: Wordplay Workout Pt.1

Postby Rain Matrix » Aug 22nd, '08, 21:08

funny u never puff yur ego up after battling me

anyway I didn't come here to remind u why u changed yur name
I came to say nice drop good wordplay some of tha set ups were
OVER done to tha point where they wern't as effective but

it was good :y:
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