Make It To The Top [Final]

[Solace]

[Verse 1]
I can feel the pressure, I just want to impress,
I want to be a rapper, but I just feel like less,
No matter how hard I try, there’s just no progress,
I guess I’ll never meet the day in which I meet success
Fame, money and respect...To most it’s just a dream,
Some days, sometimes, it makes me want to scream,
Get on the mic and then choke on the stage,
I dont know about you but Im not on the right page,
But sometimes we don't need to give up,
Cause life is life, and its what we need to live up...

[Chorus x2]
Get a paper, writin' just to make it to the top
I want to be a legend of rap and hip-hop,
Not shit like Soulja Boy and J.T,
And I dont care if you like 'em, I'd actually rather you hate me

[Verse 2]
Sometimes I feel just depressed and simply crazy,
getting madder and madder, since every girl plays me,
But it’s all I can get in this life full of shit,
But Im gunna grab the tounge of crticis and make them swallow it,
I'm wrapped up in anger and fights with my family,
Shit like this is just so damning,
So I ask you, when will I rise to fame?
This is life for me, this aint no fucking game,
Im generic man, just a fish in the sea,
But you see, I wanna flow just like the sea,
Destroy people with my tital waves, and tsunamis,
Of wordplay and punches,
Soon you'll see,
That instead of sitting all alone at school lunches,
Ill be the best I can be to my ability.

[Chorus x2]

[Verse 3]
Go to school, people think im blessed with luck,
cause i got lots of videogames but i dont give a fuck,
they dont know shit about my parents,
my mom fits gets me so embarressed,
my bestfriends asks "Yesterday man, who was screaming?"
"Never heard any of that, you were probably dreaming"
But no man, I aint got the worst life,
my moms a hardworker, and supportive sometimes,
just loses it randomly, crazily screams,
nope she dont care if shes making a scene,
but uh, i want fame and respect,
not a disfuntional family which feels dead.

[Chorus x1]

[Outro x4]
Yeah, gotta make it to the top
Its Never 2 Far...
Yeah, gotta make it to the top,
Its Never 2 Far...

[Outro Fades Out]


Enjoy, please comment.

This is the final version (other than a simple tweak of words) so im pretty much done with it now.

[Requiem]

Once you get used to the flow, it goes deep, and seems thoroughly thought out. It makes me feel the emotions you felt as you wrote it. very good, i liked it. especially the beginning, it just felt raw.

[Ka0t1c]

good stuff man, i like your writing...

[Solace]

Thanks to both of you. Im thinking of what else to write right now.


PS. IceKilla, im gunna record that freestyle thing you wanted me to for that beat. not sure if you still want it though, but i wanna do it

[Requiem]

Thanks to both of you. Im thinking of what else to write right now.


PS. IceKilla, im gunna record that freestyle thing you wanted me to for that beat. not sure if you still want it though, but i wanna do it

of course i do, but i've got alot of better beats now, so i'll send u a copy of the one i want to use, and u record the verse, and pm it to me.

[Solace]

Thanks to both of you. Im thinking of what else to write right now.


PS. IceKilla, im gunna record that freestyle thing you wanted me to for that beat. not sure if you still want it though, but i wanna do it

of course i do, but i've got alot of better beats now, so i'll send u a copy of the one i want to use, and u record the verse, and pm it to me.

Sure thatd be great.

[Arabian Shady]

i liked it man, but I felt it was really short,lol first verse was kila and the chorus was nice as well
Good stuff, your improving
peace

Check out mine, its called FRONT PAGE

[Solace]

i liked it man, but I felt it was really short,lol first verse was kila and the chorus was nice as well
Good stuff, your improving
peace

Check out mine, its called FRONT PAGE

Thanks man, Ill try to lengthen the verses. Ill definately check out Front Page.

[Requiem]

like the extended verses. i think u should add 3rd verse, and maybe someday u can record the whole song, and i'll make a beat for it.
cuz that's some hot stuff man, it deserves to be heard by the world.

[Solace]

like the extended verses. i think u should add 3rd verse, and maybe someday u can record the whole song, and i'll make a beat for it.
cuz that's some hot stuff man, it deserves to be heard by the world.

Maybe a 3rd verse, but for now, im happy with 2. But im still extending both of them, just thinking about what to write. And i really appreciate that you like it

[Solace]

Good shit shady, you've gotten alot better then when you started. (you were horrible when you started.)

haha your style goes really well with Icekilla's

Good job homie

and you said you weren't going to rap lol

Thanks a lot Heheh, well its kinda like a hobbie of mine but you know, I guess I got more into it while I was writing and stuff.

[Solace]

That's cool, your just taking your writing to another level by recording it.

Just wait til you get propz for a song, it feels so good

So hurry up and put a track out, so I can then get a verse from you at gunpoint for my album

lol haha will do. Later on liike when i got the time and an good quiet area im gunna record this freestyle i did yesterday with an ice killa beat. im recording with a camera (video ) so it might not have best qual, might even make my voice higher. But itll hopefully turn out good.

[Solace]

as long as it's not just pure fucking static I won't mind the quality

When I was in a band, we use to use a stereo and a cassette tape to record lmao

now that audio was horrible

LMAO dont worry, its not thattttt bad. Rock band? I just cant get the thought of "My Band" out of my head now

[Solace]

my band my band my band

nah think less d12 and more annoying emo bitch rock

I'm not proud of my past

Well enough of spamming this thread, I'm off to get some pop...i mean cock

LMAO okay no more spamming.

I hope you have a good time

[Solace]

Edited it alot. Please give comments people.