NEW STEVE SPAG - Lead The Blind (HOT)

by **Steve Spag** » Sep 6th, '08, 19:25

Just wrote this peice today to a beat called "Silent Death" by Rapitfly over on soundclick if anyone wants to check it out. It's got a pretty unique flow for it, which I hope you will get. Some of the rhymes are kind of basic, but I was trying to concentrate more on the flow for this peice. Anyways, let me know what ya' think.

I hate it that you faggots will never treat me right//
Has it been bothering you, can you sleep at night?//
I made a song just for you, on a sheet I write//
What I think at the time, on a beat that's tight//
I must be out of my mind to unleash this type//
An angry man that's inside and he eats what's nice//
It's only fury and rage, there's no peace to find//
But I am turning the page on these freaks who whine//
At a peculiar age, can you lead the blind?//
Can you see what I see, can you free your mind?//
And I ain't worried to say all my equal rights//
There ain't no sequel with me, it's a lethal ride//
And if you read all my rhymes and repeat the lines//
It triggers something inside and it reaps it dry//
It's like a flee to a fly, you can't beat the size//
And all you people in time will just meet demize//

Copywright: Steven Spagnuolo 2008.

Leave Feedback Please

by **Ka0t1c** » Sep 6th, '08, 21:15

why do you want feedback, I mean seriously, this song was just a fucking... sick ass rhyme that just kicks ass on and on and on and on and on, you get the point, sorry for misleading everyone who reads this in the beginning but this piece is great, i like the multies at the end, i'd like to see more but it gets the message across right without too many multies... i give this piece a 90/100 since i made myself the new official lyrics critic! 2 thumbs up, way up!!!

by **Steve Spag** » Sep 6th, '08, 21:18

Kaotic wrote:why do you want feedback, I mean seriously, this song was just a fucking... sick ass rhyme that just kicks ass on and on and on and on and on, you get the point, sorry for misleading everyone who reads this in the beginning but this piece is great, i like the multies at the end, i'd like to see more but it gets the message across right without too many multies... i give this piece a 90/100 since i made myself the new official lyrics critic! 2 thumbs up, way up!!!

Wow man, lol, thanks much. Really appreciated.
Thanks for the positive feedback, haha :y:

Much Respect.

by **Emadyville** » Sep 6th, '08, 22:21

Good to see someone use multies, good shit, keep it up, really liked some of what you were saying in this too.

Website · by **Solace** » Sep 7th, '08, 03:59

Man that was just ill. Fucking ill.

I especially loved how each word rhymed. From start to finish (like the last word of the first line rhymes with the last word of the last line), you know what im saying?

Is this just to keep us entertained or is it for Life Overdose?

Anyways, great piece of writing. Loved it. 10/10.

by **Xray** » Sep 7th, '08, 04:06

I hate it that you faggots will never treat me right//
Has it been bothering you, can you sleep at night?//
I made a song just for you, on a sheet I write//
What I think at the time, on a beat that's tight//

^^cocky, cause that's simple very simple and yet your acting like its a masterpiece.

other than that the drop is dope.

by **Steve Spag** » Sep 7th, '08, 04:11

shadymademe wrote:Man that was just ill. Fucking ill.

I especially loved how each word rhymed. From start to finish (like the last word of the first line rhymes with the last word of the last line), you know what im saying?

Is this just to keep us entertained or is it for Life Overdose?

Anyways, great piece of writing. Loved it. 10/10.

Thanks a lot man, I appreciate it. This isn't from "Life Overdose" though. I post very very little of that stuff on here. This is just to keep my name out there, lol.

Xray wrote:^^cocky, cause that's simple very simple and yet your acting like its a masterpiece.

other than that the drop is dope.

Thanks, but as I said in the begining "Some of the rhymes are kind of basic, but I was trying to concentrate more on the flow for this peice." I don't try to act cocky, I know where my place is, lol.