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Jesus of Nazareth

Postby enjinn » Sep 5th, '08, 02:59

The rusty steel opens my flesh, the pain has captured me
This hate still baffles me
It arose in those I’ve tried to save from agony
Satan laughs at me
As my blood falls on the sand
It pours from my hands, the horror expands
As I realize I’ve failed to transcend the evil forces in man
I refuse to quit
Will they understand the views I give
When they read it in the truest script?
Will they understand the meaning of Judas’ kiss?
Crimson fluid drips
The end is near, death is here
I see friends and peers, denying the truth and kept in fear
My breath I hear
Is as subtle as the wind
They shall understand love, if I suffer for their sins
Nails cutting through my skin
I’m slain with glee, by those I came to free
If I’m your greatest seed, why hast thou forsaken me?
I don’t understand, but I hold my trust in you
Forgive my brothers, they are blind and know not what they do
I overcome this torture with faith that you know best
“Will they understand?” was my only thought before my soul left
each one teaches one
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Re: Jesus of Nazareth

Postby Emadyville » Sep 5th, '08, 03:04

Sick nasty :y: :y: :y:
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Re: Jesus of Nazareth

Postby Ka0t1c » Sep 5th, '08, 04:02

WOW, u just kicked some ass, amazing talent, i know u are gonna be here for awhile with some great work, cant wait to read more of ur lyrics, i love em! :y: :y: :y: :y: :y:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Jesus of Nazareth

Postby Requiem » Sep 5th, '08, 04:53

that's just incredible. no words, its just unbelievably ill, yet it has profound meaning. i believe we have here the best religious rap ever written :worship:
if u ever wanted to make a song out of that, hit me up, some low drums, with a soft choir in the background would just be sick. :y:
i think ur on ur way to greatness, with freestyles like that. it took me years on tr to get my style down, but it looks as if u've mastered ur flow. :o
hit me up, we need to collab sometime :8)
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Re: Jesus of Nazareth

Postby enjinn » Sep 8th, '08, 15:44

thanks a lot for the comments!...theyre really appreciated!...and IceKilla...im down to collab anytime!
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Re: Jesus of Nazareth

Postby Requiem » Sep 8th, '08, 23:40

enjinn wrote:thanks a lot for the comments!...theyre really appreciated!...and IceKilla...im down to collab anytime!



sweet! :y: just pm me about how u wanna do it. either that, or just pm me a verse or 2, i'll design a beat around it, and add a verse of my own. :8)
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Re: Jesus of Nazareth

Postby enjinn » Sep 10th, '08, 08:10

IceKilla wrote:
enjinn wrote:thanks a lot for the comments!...theyre really appreciated!...and IceKilla...im down to collab anytime!



sweet! :y: just pm me about how u wanna do it. either that, or just pm me a verse or 2, i'll design a beat around it, and add a verse of my own. :8)


expect to recieve a pm soon :y:
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Re: Jesus of Nazareth

Postby Jay-19 » Sep 10th, '08, 13:17

Awesome lyrics man! Pure brilliance. :y:
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