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I'm Sorry + True Stroys + Upcoming single

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I'm Sorry + True Stroys + Upcoming single

Postby <VerbalTouch> » Sep 16th, '08, 01:44

Looks shitty right now but im editing it as it goes and yes these are true events that happen in m life


Verse 1

the antibiotic drug had me pulled under the rug
I was a real slug never did i ever give a shit fuck
I remember stealing my uncles gun that was dumb
just to show it off like that would gain me mo love
when he raised me as if i was his only born son
I lived with my grandmother and uncle for months (More like ten years)
Sometimes i felt as if they treated me like a mutt
but I know they all shown me love then i went 'thug'
I basically turned on um but you all know what?
I show you the same love even if i don't say it
I mean it

[hook]

Uncle dean im sorry for stealing your gun
I was wrong and it was really damn dumb
I'm sorry just thought it would gain me more love
I know its hard you and grandma raised me like a son
Thought it would make me more tough and im done

verse 2

Done Always doing the wrong Im tryin to say im sorry in this song
This is a true story coming from my heart i understand its hard
But knowing what i did really tears my apart you should see my heart
it hurts looks like hell i really do wish that we could go back to the start
I admit Ive done drugs but it was only like two puffs over a small blunt
Never got caught let me tell you something i sure regret stealin a gun
Cause it sometimes more then likely sucks liven with other drunks
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Re: I'm Sorry + True Stroys + Upcoming single

Postby Rain Matrix » Jan 27th, '09, 16:16

it's simple but it gets the point across :y:
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Re: I'm Sorry + True Stroys + Upcoming single

Postby SajN » Jan 27th, '09, 16:19

Stop bumping old threads MacD! This is about 3rd or 4th time you do it! Just fucking stop it!
One more thing, Verbaltouch/DjBlue is banned, so there's no point in feeding this..
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