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Lime Light (Text and Audio)

Postby Requiem » Sep 20th, '08, 00:07

edit: big ax-d produced an audio version for me :y:
http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=49492

chorus

Yo, i fight for the lime light,
to highlight my style unlike,
any other voice inside the twilight,
i stand alone, and alone i fight,
yo, i belong in this mic.

verse 1

In order to flow u need to show emotion,
with no notion of where ya goin,
wit all the commotion in an ocean,
too deep to know which group to roll with,
you can't go with, the fear of demotion,
unless you cope with the fear of devotion.
To go and blow this, with explosives
I can feel it in my bones, i'm about to explode on this mic,
and kill all the haters and critics in sight,
cuz i can fight with bright lightning strikes,
i'm unlike any tyke you've tried to right,
now let me recite from my endless plight,
to take flight like a kite to an unreachable height,
i can feel the fire about to ignite,
tonight is the last night, no more light,
live life in darkness, with no insight, despite,
the bite of five vikaden delights.....psych....

chorus

verse 2

i can feel it like a premonition,
i'm bout to put the keys into the ignition,
cuz my position is to blow up rhymes like demolition,
so with ur permission and plenty of ammunition,
i'm a hit and run, disappearing faster than an apparition,
i guess its intuition, or maybe my ambition,
to beat politicians into submission,
through my rhymes, no need for a definition,
here's a proposition for my opposition,
i hope u listenin to my addition to the song volition,
i aint no magician,
but people disappear when they make fun of my disposition,
i'm a musician with a composition made up of acquisitions,
it's my tradition to shock you, like an electrician,
i don't need recognitions, just an intermission.

chorus

verse 3

to do ur best, rhymes have to be new and fresh,
like knives through the flesh, ur put to the test,
unless u express ur stress to congress,
it's like an obsession to impress,
i confess, rhymes is the secret to my success,
i'm just blessed, to be ill, u already know the rest.



and that's the whole song. i know verse 3 is short. o well. check out the audio version. it's ill, thanks to big ax-d :8)
Last edited by Requiem on Sep 21st, '08, 01:04, edited 4 times in total.
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Re: Lime Light (work in progress)

Postby Solace » Sep 20th, '08, 00:37

Liked the start.
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Re: Lime Light (work in progress)

Postby Emadyville » Sep 20th, '08, 03:39

Very good, curious, the beginning there meant to be fast or slow?
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Re: Lime Light (work in progress)

Postby Requiem » Sep 20th, '08, 03:43

Emadyville wrote:Very good, curious, the beginning there meant to be fast or slow?


more faster, than slow. sort of like "lose yourself" flow, fast, but not speedy

edit: will be updating verse 1 momentarily, look out for it
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Re: Lime Light (work in progress)

Postby Xray » Sep 20th, '08, 12:04

not bad :8)
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Re: Lime Light (work in progress)

Postby Solace » Sep 20th, '08, 16:50

That verse was ill, its gunna be sick on your lp.
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Re: Lime Light (work in progress)

Postby Requiem » Sep 20th, '08, 19:13

shadymademe wrote:That verse was ill, its gunna be sick on your lp.


thx man, i've already recorded it, now it's just a matter of mxing to a beat. :8)
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Re: Lime Light (work in progress)

Postby Requiem » Sep 21st, '08, 01:00

update, got an audio track, and completed the text version. :8)
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