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JMG's Journal

Postby JMG » Sep 26th, '08, 09:28

yo most of these TR-tist are garbage
dont get me started on that bar bitch,
with his fuckin dumpster flow
yeah i say im the best like im under oath
cuz even tho im thrown under boats and buses
only johova's judgements come with justice
so fuck this oh so contructive critisisim
like i need a bunch of fuckin bitches behind a mouse
to tell me what to rhyme about
and u can go ahead with one click and erase this
cuz i only give a fuck on a limited bases
my journal goes on its got unlimited pages
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Re: JMG's Journal

Postby Xray » Sep 26th, '08, 16:56

if you don't give a fuck, why would you write a verse about all this? you clearly give a fuck more than most :)

oh and this WAS wack.
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Re: JMG's Journal

Postby Solace » Sep 26th, '08, 21:16

Xray wrote:if you don't give a fuck, why would you write a verse about all this? you clearly give a fuck more than most :)

oh and this WAS wack.

JMG JAZ GOT SERVVVED :o

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Re: JMG's Journal

Postby JMG » Sep 26th, '08, 21:31

its for the fans
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Re: JMG's Journal

Postby Solace » Sep 26th, '08, 21:40

Your mom does not count.
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Re: JMG's Journal

Postby JMG » Sep 26th, '08, 21:48

ull c
JMG wrote: so are you gonna come fight me or not

Menzo wrote:No, I HAVE something to live for.
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Re: JMG's Journal

Postby Solace » Sep 26th, '08, 21:50

lmao. But seriously, if you stop with that whole "i dont care about your opinion but ill post this stuff to get your opinions for no reason" and just write, id definately stop trashing you. Your a good lyricist. Def. better than me, so i cant hate.
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Re: JMG's Journal

Postby The Toy Soldier » Sep 27th, '08, 01:23

id ont really like verse with egos/fronting/acting like the shit but i like the end rhymes
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Re: JMG's Journal

Postby Ka0t1c » Sep 27th, '08, 06:10

it's decent but i expect better from u, do it not for the fans but yourself
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: JMG's Journal

Postby Xray » Sep 27th, '08, 06:11

JMG wrote:its for the fans

shadymademe wrote:Your mom does not count.

:laughing: i lol'd :laughing: :worship:

oh btw how can you have fans if you don't give a fuck what your "fans" think about the piece?
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Re: JMG's Journal

Postby JMG » Sep 27th, '08, 06:55

arent journals suppose to be secret why is everyone viewin this stay out please
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Re: JMG's Journal

Postby Xray » Sep 27th, '08, 07:18

JMG wrote:arent journals suppose to be secret why is everyone viewin this stay out please

aren't you very funny :o
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