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My Point Of View

Postby Ka0t1c » Oct 9th, '08, 03:23

i remember when i was a new member to this crew in November
and i didn't have a clue who was a big contender
or who was a pretender
but i stayed true with what i do
so ever since i entered i followed thru to hit front n center
i had problems too, they called me slender
but i found my view, now i wanna send ya
all into that realm to get you out the blue
welcome to Kaotic's end of
Hell - i grew, my balls are more bigger
and i'm hungry for my dinner
so i'm in hot persuit to become another winner
cuz hip hop's confused, there's a lot of beginners
but i've got the fuse to erupt a few inventors (new rap artists' P.O.V.)
well enough, get loose, let up, take off the suspenders (stop being uptight)
because i want you in tune, re-adjust your antennaes... (find yourself)
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: My Point Of View

Postby Emadyville » Oct 9th, '08, 03:41

Damn by far your best. Great topic and concept. Rhymes were sick, flowed seems like it would be crazy if you recorded. :y:
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


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Re: My Point Of View

Postby Ka0t1c » Oct 9th, '08, 03:44

ok, thanx for ur comments... I NEED TO FUCKING RECORD SOMETHING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: My Point Of View

Postby Emadyville » Oct 9th, '08, 03:54

YEah I was wondering why I never heard anything. Just verses.
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