Rap Til I'm Broke

[Ka0t1c]

i'm a wild one with a style of my own when i compile something from my dome for the microphone
i've been going awhile, still there's more time to grow from a small child into my final milestone

check the file, downward spirals i just don't accept, denial's gone
i'd rather smile than be low in a wreck so it's best that i show i'm ready to stretch or i never will glow

i gotta catch my gold, but full of traps are these roads wherever i roam
i don't know if i'll adapt to the toll, but my impact on the globe's in my notepad that i wrote

and the results i should add and promote, i won't ask if you'll vote, my broadcast shall uncloak
like a mask once the facts i expose to the mass cuz i won't pass up this whole task to dispose to the trash

my act is no joke, im'a rap til i'm broke

[Steve Spag]

Pretty sick man, liked the flow for some parts. Not your best peice in my opinion, but it was cleverly written and I respect that, haha.

i gotta catch my gold, but full of traps are these roads wherever i roam
i don't know if i'll adapt to the toll, but my impact on the globe's in my notepad that i wrote

That was my fav. part of it.

Keep it up man!


Oh, and if ya' have time check out my new drop "Misery Loves Company" and let me know what ya' think. Your feed is always highly respected.

Peace

[Requiem]

sick man. altogether incredible.

kinda sorta dont' get the "dome for the microphone" line tho

[Tash8]

too robotic sounding, can't see anyone rapping this without sounding like rain matrix on a mic.

[Rain Matrix]

tash8 thanks for tha free advertisement
I have a girlfriend tho so don't make this any more wierd than it has to be

dude's probably hating cuz u weren't afraid to give me some feedback
this was a good piece I could relate to it cuz I'm broke as hell yur style is unique and very talented

oh and if I'm a robot does that mean I can blow tash 8's head off and not do time
oh well even if I do tha time some wack rapper would come back as tash 9

[JMG]

Why you gettin so offended of him callin you a robot? Don't be ashamed of what you are!

[Urban Punk]

I love the creativity you put into it keep it up bro

too robotic sounding, can't see anyone rapping this without sounding like rain matrix on a mic.

LMAO! robot

[Rain Matrix]

you guys have no life... how would u know I sounded like a robot unless u were listening to my stuff?
I didn't force you to did I? I'm not bringing up your name out of nowhere show me the same respect or it's obvious your too chilish to take rap seriously... I work with a real record company not some I'll suck u off McMaybe if I can do a collabo shit... u see that McMaybe did nothingto me and I dissed him sound familar? - I bet you fags will take issue with that tho

[Ka0t1c]

kinda sorta dont' get the "dome for the microphone" line tho

dome = head

[Ka0t1c]

thanx Steve, IceKilla, Rain, & Urban Punk, i'm glad u gave me some positive input on this piece and helping me improve my writing

and Tash, this piece doesn't sound robotic