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ThE KeyStyle FiLe's

Postby JMG » Oct 14th, '08, 05:46

Who Did It

Start Time: 12:36 pm

New an improved there back with a vengence
when you killed the orginal u didnt know it was pregent
now junior is here to avenge his fathers death hit
who responsible your best wish is to confess it
I'll put you under citizens arrest and lyrically convict you
this is the biggest conspiracy since that vick dude
and your gonna meet the fate of every dog that lost
right now your all at fault so u can call it holocaust
unless someone surrenders answers
cuz im bout to throw a temper tampurm

End Time 12:48
Last edited by JMG on Oct 29th, '08, 09:48, edited 3 times in total.
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Re: ThE KeyStyle FiLe's Jr

Postby Emadyville » Oct 14th, '08, 06:30

Good shit, I liked it for a keystyle :y:
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Re: ThE KeyStyle FiLe's Jr

Postby Ka0t1c » Oct 15th, '08, 02:28

do u mean tantrum at the end? ne ways its pretty good
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: ThE KeyStyle FiLe's II

Postby JMG » Oct 17th, '08, 04:19

thanks :b:
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Start Time 11:09

The bar's i spit are so mad amazin
there like a figment of your imagination
the level there on your mind can even begain to reach
so dont even try to extend and reach these upper section seats
you can gaze, glace and take a gander
but you cant hand shake these standards
and your feed is like tryin to teach an english teacher grammer
i aint seekin answers i stand on my own feet
till i sit on my throne seat, i cant control these mulites
there immuned to my wirting process
when i try im complex but im high as risin stock dept's
so im tryin typin nonsence tryin to find a concept

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Re: ThE KeyStyle FiLe's II

Postby Rain Matrix » Oct 17th, '08, 04:53

I'm amazed that u can tell time :shifty:
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Re: ThE KeyStyle FiLe's II

Postby JMG » Oct 17th, '08, 06:18

im amazed u can speak english
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Re: ThE KeyStyle FiLe's II

Postby Xray » Oct 17th, '08, 11:56

Rain Matrix wrote:I'm amazed that u can tell time :shifty:

JMG wrote:im amazed u can speak english

LMFAO at this homo battle
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Re: ThE KeyStyle FiLe's II

Postby JMG » Oct 17th, '08, 23:16

"Help"

Start Time: 5:55

i never thought id be a smoker now im nicafiendin
out of reasons to give a decent excuse as to why it matters
i aint got nothin to lose everyday life gets sadder
and we can't predict our final chapter
but were dyin after, regardless our heart quits beatin
are hardships sinkin symbolizing the end of pain an sufferin
but were afraid of whats under and we fear what we dont understand
so we roam above the land stranded empty handed hopin our wish is granted
but these shootin star's pass right by me on my knees god almighty please
consider me and my wishes dreams an everything in between them
i cant be any better then my deeds been please help me fight these demons

End Time 6:12
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Re: ThE KeyStyle FiLe's II

Postby Solace » Oct 18th, '08, 01:08

Oh shit i read the first one. ILLLLLL i cant even write like that. The first 2 lines pulled me in. But wouldnt it be "his mothers death hit" cause i dont see how the dad could have been pregnant. Anyways that was some fucking ill shit you on. Just these lines stood out for me though, so pretty much half.

New an improved there back with a vengence
when you killed the orginal u didnt know it was pregent
now junior is here to avenge his fathers death hit


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Re: ThE KeyStyle FiLe's II

Postby JMG » Oct 18th, '08, 01:19

thanks, yeah lol it should of been mother, i knew that writing it but i just said fuck it. :b:
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Re: ThE KeyStyle FiLe's II

Postby JMG » Oct 22nd, '08, 03:31

I'm never serious cuz lifes a joke
i just light an smoke away my sorrow's
cuz its just another day tommrow
although i got strong goals in the long term
im still searchin for a calm nerve
im on a verge of some kinda breakdown
my mind weighs down my thoughts
its like a thousand pounds i walk with
stuck with this frown and im exhausted
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Re: ThE KeyStyle FiLe's II

Postby Emadyville » Oct 23rd, '08, 16:56

JMG wrote:thanks :b:
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Dome Leakage

Start Time 11:09

The bar's i spit are so mad amazin
there like a figment of your imagination
the level there on your mind can even begain to reach
so dont even try to extend and reach these upper section seats
you can gaze, glace and take a gander
but you cant hand shake these standards
and your feed is like tryin to teach an english teacher grammer
i aint seekin answers i stand on my own feet
till i sit on my throne seat, i cant control these mulites
there immuned to my wirting process
when i try im complex but im high as risin stock dept's
so im tryin typin nonsence tryin to find a concept

End time 11:19



This was dope.
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Re: ThE KeyStyle FiLe's II

Postby Xray » Oct 23rd, '08, 17:12

let me tell you something, and maybe you can tell what im gonna tell you to your "keystyle homies". if you've got the heart to break someones heart in any matter, you've got the heart to lie about this being a "keystyle" you know aswell as we all know that the word keystyle don't mean shit. so im gonna accept these lyrics as just a piece you wrote. don't ever say its a keystyle again, cause even if it is, no one gives a fuck (in a manner of respect that is).
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Re: ThE KeyStyle FiLe's II

Postby JMG » Oct 23rd, '08, 20:51

Well obviously you give a fuck otherwise you wouldn't be crying about it. look faggot if you got a problem with the way i write then don't fuckin read it, your opinion means nothing to me. now lets get back to some keystyles!


yo im a keystylist im wild with these key's
hell yeah i break hearts i aint got no sympathy
i just flow wickedly on these symphony's
listen please your opinion means nothin like loose change
nada, zip , goose egg..i like my goose greyed
and at the end of the night ill be bitch slappin you
yeah im a keystylist with an attitude
tryin to xray my rhymes you cant see inside them loser
and u couldn't spit any real shit if i give u the heimlich maneuver
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Re: ThE KeyStyle FiLe's II

Postby Solace » Oct 23rd, '08, 22:03

Last line^ :worship:
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