The TRshady Forum became read-only in December 2014. The 10 year history will live on, in this archive.
Continue the discussion with the new home for the Eminem and Hip Hop discussion: HipHopShelter.com.

Da Nor' Easter Keystyle

Want to share a poem, story or a moving article? Share creative literature text here.

Da Nor' Easter Keystyle

Postby Rain Matrix » Oct 29th, '08, 00:50

my rhymes are like Deadly Hooks my honest lines Get These Crooks
confrontation, yur already Shook, yur about as "raw" as Freshly Cooked
I Roast Mics So Nice that my Flow Might just destroy these Low Life's
another Skull Sniped u have No Right to be acting like u have to be Told Twice
time and time again I tell u that I'm not tha Soldier Ta Test
but like a suicidal geronimo yur gonna make me go Over Tha Edge
to hell with what tha pop charts Calls Rap, I run toward a cliff and Haul Ass
my lyrical content is All Facts, my tracks are like yur first love, u Fall Fast
either that or yur a Hater mad cuz I could Wager my Paper on erradicating u Fakers
I'll run from that "state farm" like a good Neighbor u can come too if u want Player
I don't speak just to Say Words, I spit cuz I'm good with a bic and I don't mean tha Razor
User avatar
Rain Matrix
Soldier
Soldier
 
Posts: 1967
Joined: Oct 6th, '06, 21:25
Location: In that mirage you saw.
Gender: Male

Re: Da Nor' Easter Keystyle

Postby Ka0t1c » Oct 29th, '08, 04:34

I
Roast Mics So Nice that my Flow Might just destroy these Low Life's
another Skull Sniped u have No Right to be acting like u have to be Told Twice


this part is well done, but the rest was half way there imo
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
User avatar
Ka0t1c
Role Model
Role Model
 
Posts: 3919
Joined: Nov 16th, '05, 08:28
Location: Hell, Room #5150
Gender: Male

Re: Da Nor' Easter Keystyle

Postby Rain Matrix » Oct 29th, '08, 08:14

thanks kaotic I know u check out my rhymes... u got what it takes man I'm just a drunk fool with no talent who dropped a keystyle like this
User avatar
Rain Matrix
Soldier
Soldier
 
Posts: 1967
Joined: Oct 6th, '06, 21:25
Location: In that mirage you saw.
Gender: Male

Re: Da Nor' Easter Keystyle

Postby JMG » Oct 29th, '08, 08:25

do u ever no what ur talkin about
JMG wrote: so are you gonna come fight me or not

Menzo wrote:No, I HAVE something to live for.
JMG
Renegade
Renegade
 
Posts: 2232
Joined: Dec 7th, '06, 01:58
Location: Miami

Re: Da Nor' Easter Keystyle

Postby Rain Matrix » Oct 29th, '08, 17:26

I know if I battle jmg I'll win straight up... set it up or shut up
User avatar
Rain Matrix
Soldier
Soldier
 
Posts: 1967
Joined: Oct 6th, '06, 21:25
Location: In that mirage you saw.
Gender: Male

Re: Da Nor' Easter Keystyle

Postby Arabian Shady » Oct 29th, '08, 18:31

^lol


yo that reali was a drunk attempt, it started of a lil slow and reached its peak at the 4th bar and around the second last bar it kinda fell off, altho you did have some wiked lines , i actually laughed out loud,

My fave line tho:


but like a suicidal geronimo yur gonna make me go Over Tha Edge
to hell with what tha pop charts Calls Rap, I run toward a cliff and Haul Ass


sick :y:

i gota question tho:

I don't speak just to Say Words, I spit cuz I'm good with a bic and I don't mean tha Razor


what does bic mean, is it a typo or sumthing??? :confusion:
Peace
ArAbIaN ShAdY


We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


FiNd mE At dA "CREATIVE SECTION", I AM ULTIMATE INNOVATION!!
User avatar
Arabian Shady
Renegade
Renegade
 
Posts: 2953
Joined: Jul 17th, '06, 13:03
Location: 'DeM SaNd DuNeS... DUBAI!!
Gender: Male

Re: Da Nor' Easter Keystyle

Postby mcZu » Oct 29th, '08, 19:05

^ a Bic is a pen..

Nice rhymes, not bad :b:
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
- Lupe Fiasco

Follow Me!

McZu's Blog!
User avatar
mcZu
Band Leader
Band Leader
 
Posts: 7297
Joined: Jun 17th, '08, 14:21
Location: Rotterdam
Gender: Male


Return to Creative Writing



Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users