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Fuck It all

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Fuck It all

Postby Rain Matrix » Oct 29th, '08, 17:40

nevermore not again
this has got ta end u really are not a friend
this is betrayal, me and my thoughts we say so
the result is gonna be fatal I don't speak fables
I'm done with down tha revolution runs it now
u will be punished clown when my guns spits rounds
my lyrics are loaded in my spirit's a full clip
when u hear this u'll notice it's tha clearist of motives
I don't know why u hate all I know is I'm thru fakes
this is tha dawn of a new day I hope I'm not too late
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Re: Fuck It all

Postby Emadyville » Oct 29th, '08, 18:33

You've had much better but this had some decent rhymes.
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


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Re: Fuck It all

Postby Arabian Shady » Oct 29th, '08, 18:34

it was kinda basic man, wasnt feelin it

1 line equal to all of it:

my lyrics are loaded in my spirit's a full clip


Peace
ArAbIaN ShAdY


We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


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