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Postby Solace » Nov 1st, '08, 05:50

All of my previous work must be erased. :whistle:
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Postby JMG » Nov 1st, '08, 06:00

I liked it, good concept and flow. but I think you'd be alot better if your rhymes wearnt so simple, I see a little improvement in that tho, so your differently gettin there.
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