Your Mine Forever

[Geraldo]

this is decided to my amazing bf tommy, he cried when i rapped it to him.

I wake up every morning in your arms
i kiss u on the cheek cause u have my heart
and i know that u will protect it well
your my everything my heaven hell
everything in the middle as well
your my soul mate if u believe that kinda thing
i didnt till i saw u my whole mind went blank
that night was special i felt like home in your sheets
i couldnt walk straight i limped that whole week
i think u had worse i even had to carry you
i love you tommy i wanna marry you

[Solace]

not a bad poem. if he liked it then thats good.

[Ka0t1c]

its cool, im assuming youre female...???

[Ka0t1c]

lol, oh shit, i see, he's a flamer

[James R.]

It's more of a poem than a rap song. The rhyming was very basic, and it didn't all rhyme that well. The sexual references kind of took away from the song. I mean you're talking about how much this guy means to you and how much you care about him, then you start talking about how he made you limp for a week. It was just out of place. Any type of graphic sexual encounters in a song that's about how much you care usually doesn't work out. Gay or straight. Keep practicing.

[Slimm]

i couldnt walk straight i limped that whole week

blahaha

[gutawafang]

Must be touching to the guy.