1st verse in 4-6 months

[James R.]

You never had to worry I wouldn’t shine wit the rhyme
I know it’s been a grip but I changed my grind wit the times
And every time I spit I open eyes of the blind
To hear a verse from me is like finding diamonds in grime
I’m the renegade type and the other kinds is behind
So many biters around you gotta hide ya design
But Ima ride wit the times and Ima vibe wit the bass
You need to try to behave or catch five in the face
Forget hidin the trace when I slide into place
I treat you like a fiend and put my lines in your face
You front wit every rhyme and you think mine is a fake?
Just pick a time and a place and I’ll divide and disgrace
I’m tearin through your squad, fuck dyin wit grace
I need to get my kicks on and just tighten the lace
Talkin bout brining it back the future’s lighin the space
Check you off the list when I put my nikes in your face

[mcZu]

It's not bad, considering you didn't write in 4-6 months, liked the rhyme pattern, nice vocab
enjoyed reading it, overall a nice piece of work

[Requiem]

i really thought that was a sick verse

great use of multies, great flow which was consistent throughout, great rhymes, and awesome subject matter. i think ur one of the better artists on tr right now. that are active at least.

[James R.]

Thanks for the comments guys. I always appreciate it. I'm gonna try to stay active now that I got a little more time on my hands. I'm trying to write at least one verse every day, so you should be seeing a lot more from me.

[Rain Matrix]

I liked it easy to read and great flow as always... I hope to see more

[Arabian Shady]

yeah, never ead anything from you , this is a start tho,
wiked rhymes and an exellent flow,
nice comback'
fav lines tho:

You front wit every rhyme and you think mine is a fake?
Just pick a time and a place and I’ll divide and disgrace

that was sick

[gutawafang]

Yeah this must be years of practice my man.

[James R.]

Thanks guys.

Rain Matrix, good to see you're still readin my shit bro. I'll check yours before the day's end

And gutawafang yeah, I been at this on and off for a couple years. Reading is the key. That and listening to intelligent artists. That's the best practice really lol