Shut the fuck up

[The Toy Soldier]

what do you do when people just won't shut the fuck up?
just what do you throw? a punch or an uppercut
sometimes they get more annoying than big sluts
they think they best me in an argument but in a fight-well good luck
I don't solve things with words I solve them with rhymes
I don't rap to act, I rap cuz its my pact
when I don't want to hit those who just get on my nerves
got my fist clenched like the right hand of a perve
I am right cuz I say I'm right, even if it sounds stubborn
everything you say to me bounces back to you cuz ur glue and im rubber
don't mean to get childish on you but still youre a trouble
argue with me bring proof and i'll still say no, now i mean that on the double
sorry didn't mean to burst your bubble
but fuck with me, and youll collapse like rubble
I'm sorry if you think bad about what I say
call me a homophobe, but you're just gay
see the thing is i aint afraid of you you fucking faggot
to me your nothing more than a mere maggot
you lag it, your making me slow down
but i still keep it in tempo even if i st-st-st-stutter
I'll make you a heterophobe, have you spreadin the peanut butter
you gonna need a diaper for when i leave you shook
now you scientific dick go look in your little book

if its crap i dont really care im just releasing anger

I'm fucknig tired of arguments where I just end up being wrong, drop some feed.

[Xray]

lol good way of relieving your stress

[The Toy Soldier]

lol good way of relieving your stress

Thanx I tried to focus a little mroe on similes becuase I noticed my raps lacked it.

[Slim Zaddy]

nice work , flow is good , rhymes 2 , and ya i liked the way you have express your thoughts .. overall =

[Solace]

Flow was off at very little points, similies were nice. You totally bit that "st-t-t-uderrr" line from Eminem but it worked good overall i rate this...7/10

[Rain Matrix]

not bad if u have to release anger this is tha way to do it

one quick sidenote... rubble can't collapse that part was confusing

[mcZu]

Not bad, nice way of relieving stress.
If you had focused it would've been much better, still nice though
keep it up

[Robbie G]

It was alright but it actually felt a little bit corny to me.

[The Toy Soldier]

It was alright but it actually felt a little bit corny to me.

how?