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Tha NWO Scenario (edited)

Postby Rain Matrix » Nov 8th, '08, 17:37

most of my life I was Rejected a hint of anger was Detected that left Me Breathless
another panic attack, I think He Get's This just to Be Tested on his lyrical Reflexes

how do I deal with These Stresses by composing rhymes with Each Sentance
many bullets of pain get Deflected I'm not lying that's why I'll never be Elected

I'm out in Public steady facing Judges with Grudges basing verdicts on Budgets
tha whole system is Corrupted that's why next time I'm Fucked With, Slugs Spit

go shotty it's yur Birthday, my Words Say I wanna be rich in tha Worst Way
rhyming in Burst Spray I'm at my Work Place with a mic and a Merc's Rage

there is no Safety when I go Crazy plunging my Blade Deep inside yur Evil Brain
I won't see my People Slain to hell with yur Legal Game yur blood will Equal Rain

scattered On Tha Ground as soon as any Drama's Found that's no way to make yur Mamma Proud
tha revolution Want's Ya Now, when he says new world order that's when we shut Obama's Mouth
Last edited by Rain Matrix on Nov 9th, '08, 04:18, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: Tha NWO Scenario

Postby mcZu » Nov 8th, '08, 18:27

nice drop, sick rhyme pattern there.. Enjoyed reading it
Keep it up :b:
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Re: Tha NWO Scenario

Postby Ka0t1c » Nov 8th, '08, 23:43

i like how u switch it up using pivot points
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Tha NWO Scenario

Postby MC Anonymous » Nov 8th, '08, 23:48

:o :o :o :o

Nice!!! This one really impressed me. Good job! :y:
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Re: Tha NWO Scenario

Postby JMG » Nov 8th, '08, 23:59

thats great in all but it has nothing to do with the nwo scenario.
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Re: Tha NWO Scenario

Postby Rain Matrix » Nov 9th, '08, 04:15

^^^ I'm sorry JMG yur right I edited out tha last bar so I didn't get harrased by H*meland S*curity but I'm drunk now so I'll put it back in... after all freedom of speech is American unlike them fascist bastards that think tha will of evil fraudulent coporations is more important then tha will of tha people
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Re: Tha NWO Scenario (edited)

Postby Arabian Shady » Nov 9th, '08, 06:55

dude that was ill man,
very well written , flow was absolutely constant, nice use of multies and a couple meta's here and there, glad your back to this style of writing, cause this shit is unique man :y:
wiked stuff :worship:

fav line tho:
I'm out in Public steady facing Judges with Grudges basing verdicts on Budgets
tha whole system is Corrupted that's why next time I'm Fucked With, Slugs Spit
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So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: Tha NWO Scenario (edited)

Postby JMG » Nov 9th, '08, 07:13

yeah thats good, i belive that shit is comin soon 2.
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Re: Tha NWO Scenario (edited)

Postby lilrossy » Nov 9th, '08, 09:19

yo man dats shit was awesome, nice drop! :y:
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Re: Tha NWO Scenario (edited)

Postby Slim Zaddy » Nov 9th, '08, 09:49

pal , this is hot .. no really hot .. keep going :y:
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