Next Chapter

[Ka0t1c]

after this chapter of me is over as a soldier
it's back to what matters more than being ordered and cornered
cuz i'm a man with a dream, from horrors transformed my story
which cannot quarantine my war, my chore's for enjoying
the world which may seem bland but aint boring
my plans are to free, expand, not deploying to Iraq overseas
my head has been boiling to get off these tracks, they're destroying
my record recording so the pressure must cease
cuz lesser annoying, i can rest and find peace
my test is now joining the best at brainstorming
and transfer every masterpiece since my path is still going

[Emadyville]

Was real good lyrically, the message and concept was good, the last line needs to be changed imp tho

[Ka0t1c]

ok, thanx, i might fix it up

[Emadyville]

ok, thanx, i might fix it up

Yeah just a thought, the rhymes all flowed well but the last line seemed to throw it off ya know imo

[mcZu]

Not bad
I enjoyed reading it

[Steve Spag]

Damn bro, CRAZY rhyme-scheme. Vocab was perfect, flow was sick, you kept it fresh...one of your better drops for sure.

Keep it up bro!

[Ka0t1c]

thanx steve, i agree with u, i wanna put this on cd