Opoligiez

by **Trigger** » Nov 28th, '05, 06:11

(intro)

yo this spit is to ya'll that i got all up tight to
i'll try harder to except the criticism
just i hope that this lil thing fixes broken shit
dan yo i know u drink u milk no worries bros b4 hoes wit out clothes lol
andrew guy, thx 4 callin me an athlete that was neat, but yo u r goin somwhere, just give it some time

(chrous)
take one good glance into these eyez,
all ur shit is good i wont criticize,
maybe half thruth but all liez.

This shit is harder then i thought,
i lied shit came around full circle and i got cought.

just gotta do wat i have to do,
i acted like a fool,
non cool, steppin down from a rap battle duel.

srry ya'll,
ya'll seen me stadin tall,
now this is the side of me where i cwall.

(verse 1)

when i spit shit, i rip shit, i need shit, i grab shit,
dan, andrew read and critisize all u want on this spit,
just a lil bit, not to much or i'll thro another hissy fit,
i'll give ya'll maybe two three verse's and i incorage u to call it shit.

now this verse is just the begining of song,
its ment to heal the shit between friends since we were young,
three lil shitz didn't quite new were we belong,
small but strong, we all got along,
shit Dan u might not remember the game didy kong.

i hope u guys had a good laugh with the first line,
inside joke ya'll dont get all intwined,
dont fall behind,
(noises)rewind
era era era u can try to find,
the connection, the bind,
its kinda like walking thro the mall blind.

(chrous)
take one good glance into these eyez,
all ur shit is good i wont criticize,
maybe half thruth but all liez.

This shit is harder then i thought,
i lied shit came around full circle and i got cought.

just gotta do wat i have to do,
i acted like a fool,
non cool, steppin down from a rap battle duel.

srry ya'll,
ya'll seen me stadin tall,
now this is the side of me where i cwall.

(verse 2)

dan yo this is verse two,
mutha fuka this one's all about you,
i think we first met in schoo,
i wish we can go bak in dem days and kick it like we use too,
fav colour blu, ne prob we'd bust though.

we always had eachother backs till the end,
when i got booted from my place i crashed at ur crib use a tru friend,
i know i acted like u where a worthless piece of shit i know how to pretend,
a message im tryin to send,
its up to u, ride till the end?

(chrous)
take one good glance into these eyez,
all ur shit is good i wont criticize,
maybe half thruth but all liez.

This shit is harder then i thought,
i lied shit came around full circle and i got cought.

just gotta do wat i have to do,
i acted like a fool,
non cool, steppin down from a rap battle duel.

srry ya'll,
ya'll seen me stadin tall,
now this is the side of me where i cwall.

(verse 3)
yo andrew pelkey,
this is verse three,
hope u read this far to understand the fact that im sorry,
met in grade 8 and shur i bouced from there a lil early,
image blurry, i thought i had to get outta of there in a hurry.

fuk guy we had some of the best laughs i ever had,
too bad, lil things like compition gets me mad,
somthings in common not good but maybe not all that bad,
we both grew up without a dad,
but fuk all that,
we both now if we'd seem em again we'd smash em with a bat.

b4 doin that we'd show em wat we've become,
pull a 360 step to ther face and witness ther body become numb,
tell em we can do wit out, and that like some where not dumb..u fukin bum,
spit in the fuka's face lettin him know he's scum.

srry 4 gettin off topic like that yo,
but its the way u use ur words and the way they flow,
ur goin somewhere just give it some time u'll see it fo sho.
(chrous)
take one good glance into these eyez,
all ur shit is good i wont criticize,
maybe half thruth but all liez.

This shit is harder then i thought,
i lied shit came around full circle and i got cought.

just gotta do wat i have to do,
i acted like a fool,
non cool, steppin down from a rap battle duel.

srry ya'll,
ya'll seen me stadin tall,
now this is the side of me where i cwall.

(verse 4)
now the end is near at verse 4,
this one is goin to all ya'll "sorry" i think i said it b4,
now if u think this song os a bore,
mind as well stop cause there is just a lil bit more,
i grew up on the short end of the stick eating off of the floor.

but to all ya'll that i pissed the fuk off i felt cornered,
not to many words can conpare to this word,
shit got rough started to escalete then stired.

thoughts runnin thro my head one end to the other,
why sufer, when i can run and hide find cover,
its the image of lettin my ma down and seein the face on her,
gettin denied right off the fukin bat botttled up all the anger.

these next couple of words r the last of this,
tryin hard to keep cawm and not fuk up this buiesness,
just all read this, be a witness, a man's ego and its thickness.

thats it,
im done my spit,
i hope ya'll read and except it.

(chrous)
take one good glance into these eyez,
all ur shit is good i wont criticize,
maybe half thruth but all liez.

This shit is harder then i thought,
i lied shit came around full circle and i got cought.

just gotta do wat i have to do,
i acted like a fool,
non cool, steppin down from a rap battle duel.

srry ya'll,
ya'll seen me stadin tall,
now this is the side of me where i cwall.

(outro)
well thats it yo
i did wat had to be done
dan, andrew if when and if u read this hope this blows ova
pce!!

by **Nu Syd** » Nov 28th, '05, 13:05

good lines man,u doin an audio with that?

by **Trigger** » Nov 28th, '05, 21:58

yayo i just need to fine tune it and shit but thx Kj Beatz

by **Bubu** » Nov 28th, '05, 23:25

Just 1 word : AWESOME !!!

by **Trigger** » Nov 28th, '05, 23:28

thx Wagner means a lot, boosts my confidents

by **B.A.D.** » Dec 13th, '05, 02:40

by **stealth** » Dec 13th, '05, 05:40

nice work man

by **Trigger** » Dec 13th, '05, 05:48

stealth yo, thx u know u spit some awesome and meaningful shit to

by **homeboi** » Dec 14th, '05, 14:31

that shit is good. go afta them with your gunz blazin man.
fuk rapin on a fukn internet site man u should go to a label or somethin
:worship:

by **Trigger** » Dec 14th, '05, 21:38

WOO....that is soOoO very nice of u yo, thx, i read some of ur shit, it's descent yo keep that shit up

by **homeboi** » Dec 15th, '05, 02:09

yo man i will keep it up bt hw can i wen kittens like em young shut mey shit down coz i am exposing him as the foni that he is. but i am not gona stop the attack against him and g killa :boxing:

but your shit is fukn good man.
keep keepin on

by **$0 R3@L** » Dec 15th, '05, 02:16

i am not gona stop the attack against him and g killa

yo bro....diss the fuck outta who u want ...but dissing g killa is a whole new ball game bro.

You do that you practically writing out your own death warrant :readguidelines:

by **Trigger** » Dec 15th, '05, 02:57

yo homeboi, thx again 4 ur words...but when i first started right of the get go i had beef wit em and killa too, but yo give it some time and just learn to roll wit the punches...like im not 100 percent shur but i think im ight wit em and killa now, and there not all that bad.....NEwhooo just do wat u do, keep up ur shit and stay active
pce!!!