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Microphone Madness.

Postby MC Anonymous » Nov 10th, '08, 21:56

Murdering so many mics they on the endangered species list
tightening my wirst to break the barrier of light with my fist
spittin verbals until the revelations knocks at my door
spittin until the jaw muscles near my mouth get sore
spittin until the oxygen supply of the earth runs on ''E''
spittin until the lyrical demon within me becomes free
beatin' the fuck out of wack MC's till they heart stop
stay beatin' around the bush until ''W'' is surrounded with cum drops
leavin' any flamible liquids scorched when I recite verbals
keepin' the cure to lyrical deficiency tucked away in white herbals
my records gettin' more spin then jet turbine rotors
plus I stay with a ''G'' force like roller coasters
everything I spit raises my body's Fahrenheit
and I'll keep spittin' until I burn every single one of your hairs in sight
the barren sight of a stage is the result of lyrical inferno
consider the enunciation from my mouth as an eternal volcano
stay spittin' until I burn my audience with magma and brimstone
as I kick a rhyme harder then a Muay Tia boxer's shin bone
I'll keep chasing you until you're feet develop osteoporosis
keep chasing with vocals that make ya crazy like stereo psychosis
keep chasing until your beard trips up your running
keep chasing until ya teeth fall out and ya mind starts stunning
I'll take ya neck and really ''pop your collar'' bone
grind your bones to dust and smoke it with a traffic cone
Motherfucker.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Microphone Madness.

Postby Ka0t1c » Nov 10th, '08, 22:11

pretty cool, very creative thought process, 8/10
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Microphone Madness.

Postby MC Anonymous » Nov 10th, '08, 22:12

Kaotic wrote:pretty cool, very creative thought process, 8/10

Thanks for the feed :] ;)
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Re: Microphone Madness.

Postby mcZu » Nov 10th, '08, 22:17

Nice :y:
The ''jet turbine rotors'' and teh ''Muay Tia boxer's shin bone'' were sick :b:
keep it up bro
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Re: Microphone Madness.

Postby MC Anonymous » Nov 10th, '08, 22:19

mcZu wrote:Nice :y:
The ''jet turbine rotors'' and teh ''Muay Tia boxer's shin bone'' were sick :b:
keep it up bro

Thanks dude! Glad you enjoyed my work! :]
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Re: Microphone Madness.

Postby Emadyville » Nov 10th, '08, 23:35

Again I'm highly impressed, this was lyrically very well written, had some great metaphors or whatever in there, keep this shit coming :y: :y: :y:
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Re: Microphone Madness.

Postby Solace » Nov 10th, '08, 23:36

Shits sick man! The first 2 lines were what kept me into it. Beginnings need to be sick like that :y:

Your gunna be a well known lyricist on TR in no time.
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Re: Microphone Madness.

Postby MC Anonymous » Nov 10th, '08, 23:38

Thanks dudes! Every time I write I try to make something better then the last thing I wrote. :8)
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Re: Microphone Madness.

Postby Arabian Shady » Nov 11th, '08, 21:00

MC Anonymous wrote:Thanks dudes! Every time I write I try to make something better then the last thing I wrote. :8)



be happy , reviews like this prove succcess
your style is like fresh air man,we have MANY talented rappers here, some we've gotten used to,lol, but its good to see a newcomer with SOLID potential,
keep em comin :y:
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Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: Microphone Madness.

Postby MC Anonymous » Nov 13th, '08, 20:21

Arabian Shady wrote:
MC Anonymous wrote:Thanks dudes! Every time I write I try to make something better then the last thing I wrote. :8)



be happy , reviews like this prove succcess
your style is like fresh air man,we have MANY talented rappers here, some we've gotten used to,lol, but its good to see a newcomer with SOLID potential,
keep em comin :y:
Peace

That means a lot to me bro! Thanks a lot!
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