MC Anonymous vs. Kez [VOTING OPEN]

[Kez]

Ah, has been years since i've done this..

3-0 ko
4-1 tko
5 votes the winner

No flipping allowed
Rate in this breakdown if possible, you know the deal

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STRUCTURE
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MULTIES
RHYMES
VOCAB
COMPLEXITY
NAMEPLAY
OTHER (enjoyment, creativity anything else)

8 bars (16 lines) each

You drop first, since you called me out

[ShAdY CaPo 08]

whats "no flipping"?

[MC Anonymous]

Kez mouth wide open like he never seen a nigga diss before/ (check his pic)
I'm from the south side hopin' that I show you the meaning of this means war//

I got the FLOW OF ''TIGRIS'', The rhymes will BLOW YA IRIS
to beat me, that DEFIES ''LOGIK''/
my rhymes ARE MORE ''LOGICAL'' severe blows SCAR YOUR OPTICAL,
just keep throwin' fake bombs like a DISGUISED TAJIK//

lyrically SUPERIOR IN ALL WAYS,leave Kez BLEEDIN' LIKE MENSTRUAL CYCLES
beating his EXTERIOR IN HALLWAYS, his ass hurt so he's WEEPIN' CAUSE' of the OESTRUAL MICHEAL(google Oestrual for punch)

I'm strapped like an IRAQI TERRORIST, get me pissed,
I'll resort to the ITACHI TERRORFIST, and watch the lightning FRY YA BRAIN/
coming on all fronts like GERMAN FIGHTERS,
to blaze this dude with VERMIN LIGHTERS, and watch him burn and CRY IN PAIN//

I'll lyricaly DESTROY THIS CLOWN, got so much influence when I DEPLOY THIS FROWN
everyone on MY BLOCK IS CRYIN'/
You're gettin' SHOOK LIKE CHINA, hit ya with bullets, HOOKS N FIYA
now look were the nozzel of MY GLOCK IS EYE'N //


One dose of Anonymous causes CRANIUM CONVULSIONS you just a poor fiend begging for URANIUM EXPULSIONS
so the explosion can ''ERASE THE PAIN''/
once the punch hits it's ''LIGHTS OUT'', I combat your ''punches'' with the RIGHT BOUT
and knock you out, just to ''REPLACE THIS LAME''//

I'm cold like I'm wearing the RINGS OF SATURN, I'll kick ya balls, make ya scream with PINGS AND PATTERNS
and please, don't TRY TO RHYME/
bout' to chop this 'fake god' into pieces like CRONOS, shoot this nigga' like I'm taking some PHOTO'S
see him bleedin', now he has a reason to CRY THIS TIME//

My rhymes are infinite laced in my DNA like DOUBLE HELIX, these defamations are leaving ya with TROUBLED SPIRITS
All because you just had to PISS ME OFF/
Keep telling yourself that YOUR THE BEST. while I put you and your WHORE TO REST,
and you can only be sick if you KISSED MY COUGHS//

[Kez]

@Shady: No flipping = no ripping off other lines

Your lyrics are your kids? Christ, what kind of thing/
Did you fuck to make that happen? Damn, it's arse must sting/
Your flow is all over the place, bitch/
Like if Rain Matrix got drunk, and his keyboard hit his face, shit/
How the fuck do you think you can "beat my exterior"/
When my Internet persona alone beats yours, yours is inferior/
A ripoff of Anonymous/
Used both to seem edgy like 4Chan's group and to remain androgynous/
So that when this backfires and you're pwned like Benzino/
The only thing people associate with you's a black tuxedo/
I have no troubled spirits/
All you did is type some swear words in, what, am i sposed to read it and fuckin fear it?/
I'm not scared of your e-glock/
You e-thug, i don't need any weapons, i'll just counter and call the e-cops/
And i don't need to brag or make threats/
Cause it's obvious already that i'm better, and that's game set/

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Vote bitches, go

[ShAdY CaPo 08]

they were both ok. kez gets my vote though. KEZ.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

they were both ok. kez gets my vote though. KEZ.

please break down your vote for it to count.

[Slim Zaddy]

i go with MC Anonymous

[SajN]

please break down your vote for it to count.

[Kez]

Lol these people just plain can't read rules eh

[ShAdY CaPo 08]

like i said THEY WERE BOTH OK nothin special, thats what your gonna get from me. count my vote or not. i say kez, period.

"So that when this backfires and you're pwned like Benzino/
The only thing people associate with you's a black tuxedo"

the best bar out of em all.

[gladimnotsoluble]

Yeah they were both alright..

[4D]

FLOW - Kez
STRUCTURE - Kez
PUNCHES - Kez, 'cos Mc Anonymous's were too complicated to have impact
MULTIES - Mc Anonymous
RHYMES - Mc Anonymous
VOCAB - Mc Anonymous
COMPLEXITY - Mc Anonymous
NAMEPLAY - Kez, but both very lackin.
OTHER .......

Obviously Kez has the better flow of the 2 verses, 'cos Mc Anon was just a bit too complex for his own good. I like the originality of some of Mc Anon's lines though, so he was won the rhymes and complexity cats. Kez's structure was obviously much better which helped the flow and the punches to read better. I'm gonna give my vote to MC Anon though, as I'm a rhyme lover. But Mc Anon, you will have to edit your structure in the future or face losing battles. Kez, you did well enough here, but I was expecting more from you. You need to not underestimate people, and bring your best rhymes every time. Decent battle.

Vote: Mc Anon.

P.s Kez, you didn't flip Mc Anon's verse but you did "feed" off it, which is also seen as unfair. Feeding\ Flipping are only seen as okay in a two round battle.

[Kez]

Oh, i did?

Forgive me, has been a long time. I figured flipping just meant no ripping it off.

[4D]

Flipping is when you take something from the previous guys verse, and turn it against them. Feeding is using something from their verse is just basically replying to something he said and using it to your advantage. Like when you responded to "Beatin your exterior".

[Ka0t1c]

FLOW Kez
STRUCTURE none
PUNCHES Kez
MULTIES Anonymous
RHYMES Kez
VOCAB Anonymous
COMPLEXITY Anonymous
NAMEPLAY n/a
OTHER (enjoyment, creativity anything else)Kez

Kez's verse was pretty damn good imo, Anonymous just needs to step it up and stop using "crazy" words that people have to Google, lol