From Blindness Into The Light

[Ka0t1c]

you think i'm lackin musically, well who agrees with that?
cuz i'm bringin back what used to be with a few of these tracks

this is nothing new to me, i've been seen persuiting dreams and i grew up fast
cuz soon cds to movie screens i'll resume to broadcast

my cacoon just can't ruin me from doing tasks
my duty's pact's to keep true and lead the pack as we choose our paths

so it seems you too do need to not lose the past
cuz thru your scenes you'll proceed to remove the views of cracks

get a clue, believe from thru each of your steps
you could reach from the blue, big feats and resume with a rep

which us human beings would tune into cuz ballooned on the map
you illume every street, you had bloomed up out traps

* cuz this is how we survive
tryin to find what's right
the reason why i fight
from blindness into the light....

but i didn't find my heart at the start
times were hard cuz i wasn't smart:
defined as a target for the shopping cart

what went on in my head
something wrong i have led
i must be strong yet instead
i kept balding my tread

i was left falling apart til i found inner art
now i've rebounded cuz sparks amounted
this thread helped and
to the mountains i'm set
til my power goes dead
that's my bark which will spread
i'll be louder i said


------------* i'll fix up the fragments later

[Requiem]

is my first reaction. nice shizz man. i loved it. great concept, i really want more, cuz what's htere is awesome

sounds like ur going somewhere with the lyrics, like "we choose our paths, then we prove ourselves" type of thing...

[Rain Matrix]

this could be super dope but is definitly nice

[Ka0t1c]

thanx guys, i'll look into this more when i can focus on writing something deep, i just need to find the right time

[mcZu]

Great, liked the concept so far ( and were it's heading ).
Enjoyed reading it so far.
All I can say so far is, I'm curious to see how this will end.

[James R.]

I like the concept. I like the rhyme scheme. If you keep high level vocabulary this can and will be fucking sick.

[Ka0t1c]

thanx for checking this out, i still have yet to complete this piece so be on the lookout, im gonna edit it some more later on

[Arabian Shady]

thanx for checking this out, i still have yet to complete this piece so be on the lookout, im gonna edit it some more later on

openin was INSANE!!!!!
absolutely sick man, nice structure and flow, i like the way you twisted words but kept the meaning straight, wen i read it it sounded like a tongue twister, thats dope man
finish this monster
peace

[Ka0t1c]

thanx man, i'll try