Alphabetic Architect

[MC Anonymous]

What I did with this one is... I did a scheme like a,b,c,d,e,f, etc. for the first set, then did a,a,a,a,a,a,a, etc. then I wrote random rhymes, then did the a,b,c,d,e,f, etc. again. (was bored)

Anger becomes characteristic, demonic energy,
forever growing helplessly, justified kinetic liberty
massive nuclear opposition, population's quarry
riots silenced tyrants, unusual while xeroxing youth's zany
the alphabetic arranger arranging actual alphabets
aligning alliterations as an amplified amazing architect
I've just demonstrated the lyrical imperial
the amazing material that's more organic then cereal
I'll demonstrate again what I'm able to do with my pen
sealing the alphabetical seal in my lab, unseen to the eyes of men
acquired benevolence, conceived damnation
equal fury growing harshly inside jubilation
knighted liberty moves nicely outside prison
quiet ramblings share tales, unheard visions
wallowing xenos yield zones
as these lyrical writings destroy my fragile bones....

[Ka0t1c]

wow, you definitely have some amazing talents, i've done stuff similar to that piece before as well! that's very creative, i liked most was that u rhymed every letter of alphabet in a row (1 exception) and also that u rhymed alphabet with architect, that's awesome, great use of words too! not a simple piece to create for the average writer...

[MC Anonymous]

wow, you definitely have some amazing talents, i've done stuff similar to that piece before as well! that's very creative, i liked most was that u rhymed every letter of alphabet in a row (1 exception) and also that u rhymed alphabet with architect, that's awesome, great use of words too! not a simple piece to create for the average writer...

Thanks dude! This was fun to do, I enjoyed myself doing it lol.

[Emadyville]

Haha I had a concept to do a song using the alphabet then papoose did it, then i thought i'd do one like you just did (fuck!) lol very impressive tho

[MC Anonymous]

Haha I had a concept to do a song using the alphabet then papoose did it, then i thought i'd do one like you just did (fuck!) lol very impressive tho

Thanks bro, this took me a while to get it to my liking. I would love it if you made something of the same, that way I can learn more!

[Emadyville]

Haha I had a concept to do a song using the alphabet then papoose did it, then i thought i'd do one like you just did (fuck!) lol very impressive tho

Thanks bro, this took me a while to get it to my liking. I would love it if you made something of the same, that way I can learn more!

Maybe in time I will, I think it'd be a good challenge, and when I do, you'll be the first to know

[Arabian Shady]

sick shit, unique and an intresting concept
flow and meaning were insane, very well executed bro
thats some serious talent right there!
kepp it comin
Peace

[MC Anonymous]

sick shit, unique and an intresting concept
flow and meaning were insane, very well executed bro
thats some serious talent right there!
kepp it comin
Peace

Thanks again bro! This one is one of my more favorite writings because of the originality lol.
Your feedback is greatly appreciated!

[gladimnotsoluble]

It was good for what it was, I definitely enjoyed your writing

I dont' like the concept because it's been done, many times on this forum, and also because it's so famous by Papoose. But you did good

[Slim Zaddy]

man u got talent ..

[stevethetruth]

nice job you def got a lot of talent here

[4D]

Great stuff Mc Anonymous, good to see some talent still arriving here.

[stevethetruth]

you missed I and V

[MC Anonymous]

Great stuff Mc Anonymous, good to see some talent still arriving here.

=D Thanks man, that means a lot!