Violent Pain....Does it really matter anymore?

[MC Anonymous]

Caloric sabres used to shave him slowly
on low key, silently burning his woe pleas
as I show these instruments of violent suffering
an offering is made, the pain turns to silent buffering
crawling out the depths of hell, the scars do show
the pain leaves breaths to dwell alone, to far to know
wallowing quietly, swallowing pills in the night
controlling me is my psychotic will on the psych
holding on tight, the strand shatters, my hand splatters
the land scatters, falling faster, as the sand clatters
everything around me blackens, the light disappears
visuals are far and near, hoping that my fight perseveres
for my fear I was punished with vicious lashes
hit quick like flashes,as they left these malicious gashes
blood seeps down my skin, as I drown in sin
my frown is thin because of the town I'm in
I plead and cry softly, hoping this breed will die
the kneaded sigh I cry is coupled with pleaded sighs
the demon finally beats me to death, I stop breathin
as the teethin for justice is met, I finally have freedom.

[Emadyville]

wallowing quietly, swallowing pills in the night
controlling me is my psychotic will on the psych

holding on tight, the strand shatters, my hand splatters
the land scatters, falling faster, as the sand clatters

for my fear I was punished with vicious lashes
hit quick like flashes,as they left these malicious gashes

I plead and cry softly, hoping this breed will die
the kneaded sigh I cry is coupled with pleaded sighs
the demon finally beats me to death, I stop breathin
as the teethin for justice is met, I finally have freedom.

SICK FUCKING VERSE

[MC Anonymous]

wallowing quietly, swallowing pills in the night
controlling me is my psychotic will on the psych

holding on tight, the strand shatters, my hand splatters
the land scatters, falling faster, as the sand clatters

for my fear I was punished with vicious lashes
hit quick like flashes,as they left these malicious gashes

I plead and cry softly, hoping this breed will die
the kneaded sigh I cry is coupled with pleaded sighs
the demon finally beats me to death, I stop breathin
as the teethin for justice is met, I finally have freedom.

SICK FUCKING VERSE

Thanks dude! I felt depressed when I wrote it.

[Emadyville]

Depressed like depressed or depressed cause it wasn't good? Cause I know some of my best shit comes out when I'm depressed/pissed off

[MC Anonymous]

Depressed like depressed or depressed cause it wasn't good? Cause I know some of my best shit comes out when I'm depressed/pissed off

Depressed as in depressed lol. I'm a bi-polar with schizophrenia..... so I get depressed a lot.

[Emadyville]

Depressed like depressed or depressed cause it wasn't good? Cause I know some of my best shit comes out when I'm depressed/pissed off

Depressed as in depressed lol. I'm a bi-polar with schizophrenia..... so I get depressed a lot.

O shit, well I hope you're doing alright then man!

[MC Anonymous]

Depressed like depressed or depressed cause it wasn't good? Cause I know some of my best shit comes out when I'm depressed/pissed off

Depressed as in depressed lol. I'm a bi-polar with schizophrenia..... so I get depressed a lot.

O shit, well I hope you're doing alright then man!

Yeah I'm doing well. I got a lot of coping mechanisms to help me stay on track.
Plus I love my writing to much to do something stupid and maybe lose my talent.

[Emadyville]

Good to hear, keep doing well, and keep up the writing.

[Arabian Shady]

best part about this was your single controlled focus on not losing subject matter,everyline told a part of a bigger picture,its wiked that you've done that
flow was constant, and i liked the rhymin pattern used,went well with your style
solid drop bro
Peace

[Ka0t1c]

nice read

[Slim Zaddy]

that one was nice 2 ,, u have potentail man .. keep dropping