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Hollywood Is Dead

Postby MC Anonymous » Nov 17th, '08, 03:45

I got bored and decided to diss Hollywood Undead.
LOL :happy:

''Bitches'' been around for 3 years and still no radio play
Slipknot started that mask shit, that's what their videos say
Dr Suess rhyme scheme for these nineteen year old losers
my mind's mean, the times seen when I bust cold bruisers
watch me ''R.I.P.'' their ''masks'' and see their cranium features
stomping these faggots out like football players to stadium creatures
fake ICP wannabe's scream ''I See Pee'' when I begin to urinate
these losers intimidate fake rappers, so when they see me they're sure to hate
Johnny 3? I'll make you see spirits, just like what Ghandi sees
get on your knees and ask for forgiveness from the prodigy
The rest of these breast chested bitches needs no recognition
take a second to listen and absorb before you trek to dissin
this ain't a fucking movie, I'll really make ''Hollywood Undead''
deliver ocular penetration for popular fornication instead
originally bred to commit specified bloodshed
against the continually said rhymes by the ''Undead''.

All I need to do to relinquish and make their machines run
Is to shoot kidney stones out of my organic machine gun
your synthesizers are sent to bother humanity's eardrums
better watch your mouth because my profanity spears gums
Get the fuck out of my genre, rappin' with worthless lyrics
I know you gonna' try to flip my shit
so I'll give ya a spatula and a turd to lighten ya spirits
I'm the peripheral lyrical communicating through spiritual
visuals enunciating digital linguistic material
grab a dictionary because my dictations is scary
your feeble minds are unable to understand my dictations in clarity
leaving beatings to all your band members in stadium seatings
uranium verbal injections are injected through titanium greetings
that's enough for today my knowledge is killing em'
as I'm filling em with the biggest beat down in their millennium.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Hollywood Is Dead

Postby MC Anonymous » Nov 17th, '08, 03:51

Chet Starr wrote::crossed:

O.o :o
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Hollywood Is Dead

Postby Emadyville » Nov 17th, '08, 03:53

:worship:
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


I love you Daren
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Re: Hollywood Is Dead

Postby <Stiiccy> » Nov 17th, '08, 03:54

umm actually they get radio play around here,,,

ehh wasnt that great but it was ok
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Re: Hollywood Is Dead

Postby MC Anonymous » Nov 17th, '08, 04:01

Yeah, this wasn't meant to show hate lol
I listen to their music n shit, I just needed something to write about. :happy:
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Hollywood Is Dead

Postby Ka0t1c » Nov 17th, '08, 06:58

pretty good, definitely up there with a lot of us :y: :y:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Hollywood Is Dead

Postby Slim Zaddy » Nov 17th, '08, 20:56

it was a good drop from you ,, keep it up pal.. :y:
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Re: Hollywood Is Dead

Postby Solace » Nov 17th, '08, 22:40

I thought that was pretty sick :y: i dont know how Hollywood Undead is but that was a good diss nevertheless. Keep it up, you should post more disses (maybe you and your bros pracitce? those were crazy). Keep it up! :worship:
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