7 Years, Why and Now

[The GameKeeper]

I have seen alot of posts about being heartbroken lately... this is something I wrote almost 3 years ago about a girl I was with for 7 years... it is definitely one of the most heartfelt things i ever wrote... let me know what ya'll think... its just one verse... I never finished it.

I called it '7 Years, Why and Now'

7 years now erased(damn), I wanna be embraced
someone please catch the tears that are running down my face
7 years Lord please, help me try to understand
help me hold my head steady while Im crying in my hands
7 years say goodbye baby, all we have is memories
all along we were wrong, it was never meant to be
7 years crying eyes, all the lies really hurt
we could try a thousand times and the shit would never work
7 years feeling down, by myself lonely now
the only one I ever let show me love or hold me down
7 years no answer, miss your voice when I call
what can I expect when I made the choice to end it all?
7 years said some things that I never meant to say
said my love was long gone when it never went away
7 years why and now, thought that I was movin on
wanted to be friends and in the end... I was proven wrong.

[Rain Matrix]

damn that was deep, it was good read and a good drop

[The GameKeeper]

Thanks bro... I appreciate that mt friend.

[Solace]

I thought i commented on this before

Anyways, its nice, i really liked it, loved how everyother line starts wtih 7 years. Very, very nice and deep piece.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

yeah man deep shit....
good concept man...rhymes were gettin stronger and stronger to the end
really good piece of art

[The GameKeeper]

Thanks for the input everyone.. I should write 2 more verses and finish it. I am very critical of what I write... sometimes to my dismay. This is the one thing that I think is written perfectly... maybe I did post this same thing last year? I dont remember??? If so, sorry...

[*MIRANDA*]

so beautiful
sounds so familiar tome.. i felt it
great job

[Solace]

Thanks for the input everyone.. I should write 2 more verses and finish it. I am very critical of what I write... sometimes to my dismay. This is the one thing that I think is written perfectly... maybe I did post this same thing last year? I dont remember??? If so, sorry...

Write 1 or 2 more verses, which ever youd like. I think this would be a nice full song, but then again its completely fine the way it is right now.

[Arabian Shady]

dude that rhyme scheme is insane!!! slow and then step it up
very well written, emotions were bare enough for all to see, and that is exactly what counts
Sick shit
Peace

[gladimnotsoluble]

dude that rhyme scheme is insane!!! slow and then step it up
very well written, emotions were bare enough for all to see, and that is exactly what counts
Sick shit
Peace

I agree

[neversnooze]

i felt you on this, the only thing i disliked about it was the repetitive use of "7 years". it was still good though