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Re: it's beginning to sink in

Postby Emadyville » Nov 17th, '08, 05:05

Good start :y: Some shit was a little eh but it was good
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Re: it's beginning to sink in

Postby stevethetruth » Nov 17th, '08, 05:38

Not bad I liked it :y:
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Re: it's beginning to sink in

Postby Ka0t1c » Nov 17th, '08, 06:59

pretty nice, i'm impressed!
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: it's beginning to sink in

Postby Kez » Nov 19th, '08, 17:54

Scott Macdougall wrote:thanks guys :happy: i appreciate some good comments before the likes of kez swoop in n post images off the net just to try n b funny


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Re: it's beginning to sink in

Postby Solace » Nov 19th, '08, 22:26

Nice stuff man, keep it up :y:
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Re: it's beginning to sink in

Postby James R. » Jan 25th, '09, 06:49

Nice stuff man. I think a collab wit me and you would be too dope to handle :smoking:
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Re: it's beginning to sink in

Postby James R. » Jan 25th, '09, 06:50

Yeah man I was feelin it. I liked the vibe it had. Flowed well. Rhyming was. Could tell you were in the mood to write when you wrote it. All the elements of a good track.
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Re: it's beginning to sink in

Postby James R. » Jan 25th, '09, 06:53

I hadn't but for some reason your sig aint showin up from what I can see.
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Re: it's beginning to sink in

Postby Ella » Jan 25th, '09, 08:11

"i loved a slut and i find that quite interesting"
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Re: it's beginning to sink in

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jan 25th, '09, 10:26

pretty nice i liked it :y:
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