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Yet, I'm here. (POEM)

Postby MC Anonymous » Nov 25th, '08, 22:48

There have been many times I have
been hurt, been disposed of, been abused
life has constantly spat on my face.

Yet, I still live on.

People have killed the soul in me,
they have rejected and neglected the desires
that a person needs to feel wanted.

Yet, I am still alive.

The steps of life constantly
turn into a slide all the way down
when I reach my highest point.

Yet, I haven't fallen.

Even when you are at your
lowest or highest point of depression
you can always find that bright light
that will lead you away
with a guiding hand of love and compassion.

I have found that out now.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Yet, I'm here. (POEM)

Postby Solace » Nov 25th, '08, 22:57

I felt it, good emotions man, keep it up. Nice poem, all of it was nice. :y:
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Re: Yet, I'm here. (POEM)

Postby MC Anonymous » Nov 25th, '08, 23:01

shadymademe wrote:I felt it, good emotions man, keep it up. Nice poem, all of it was nice. :y:

Thank you :]
This poem is an old one, wrote it about 4-5months ago. :whistle:
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Re: Yet, I'm here. (POEM)

Postby Emadyville » Nov 25th, '08, 23:32

Always a good read :y:
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Postby Requiem » Nov 26th, '08, 00:10

like the concept and flow. great read :y: u just seem to be owning creative writing section. lmao, challenging me and omar's crown!
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Postby Solace » Nov 26th, '08, 00:11

MC Anonymous is the bomb and you know it Ice lmaooo :sweating:
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Postby Requiem » Nov 26th, '08, 00:13

shadymademe wrote:MC Anonymous is the bomb and you know it Ice lmaooo :sweating:


lmfao, he's pwning us right now.

btw, i love mc anonymous's signature. did u do it? :o
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Postby MC Anonymous » Nov 26th, '08, 02:03

Thanks for the love bros! :happy:
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Postby Solace » Nov 26th, '08, 02:08

IceKilla wrote:
shadymademe wrote:MC Anonymous is the bomb and you know it Ice lmaooo :sweating:


lmfao, he's pwning us right now.

btw, i love mc anonymous's signature. did u do it? :o

Yeah i did :)
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Postby mcZu » Nov 26th, '08, 18:30

Great poem, nice structure, use of words and you could feel the message clearly.
Enjoyed it, keep it up :y:
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