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Re: Some Punchlines [UPDATED]

Postby Xray » Nov 25th, '08, 06:04

I'm glad your taking interest in punchlines. Punchlines is the key to destroy rappers, so keep practicing man, I'm doing the same shit. Than after I get close to being a good punchliner I can move along to something else. Great piece for practice. :smoking:
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Re: Some Punchlines [UPDATED]

Postby Solace » Nov 25th, '08, 14:11

Thanks man i really appreciate it. When im good with punches i wanna go into the Rap Battle section and do some stuff.
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Re: Punchline Practice

Postby Requiem » Nov 25th, '08, 23:50

NICE rhymes now that i recheck it. i think that's the most punches i've ever seen condensed into one verse!!!! u should split em up, and make a song called "Punches" or something :8)
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