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Cleanin' Da Game

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Cleanin' Da Game

Postby lilrossy » Nov 29th, '08, 01:54

I wrote it a while bak, i forgot i had it. Then I read shadymedeme's bring it back, and it reminded me, so i thought i'd post it. let me know what you think.

Those pseudo-philosphical lyrics on da radio ain't got shit on my dextrous rhymes,
my inherent ability is to crush the futility kinds with my treacherous lines,

while ya'll advertising groupies 'n' girls behinds, im verbilizing bout da hard times,
so shit stop, ima spit da real hip hop & extinguish ya fucin minds,

ima clean out da game like im Mr.Sheen, cuz all deez cats are da same,
deez lil rappers are stains on my notebook so ima put 'em in dare grave,

they gon get slained by my punchlines, call me hip hop's anthony mundane,
so believe me ima birng da pain, cuz deez lil faggots rappin on tv can't remain.
"Too fatal, unable to crash
Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
"Got hoes suspicious. Even one peg leg bitches
After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
-Copywrite
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Re: Cleanin' Da Game

Postby Solace » Nov 29th, '08, 02:16

Pretty good, glad i could help you remember it. Nice flow, nice vocabulary (reminded me of Mc Anonymous). Good overall, 8.5/10 :y:
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Re: Cleanin' Da Game

Postby lilrossy » Nov 29th, '08, 04:06

thanks alot man, good lookin out.
"Too fatal, unable to crash
Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
"Got hoes suspicious. Even one peg leg bitches
After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
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