NEW Profaz ft C-Riz&Big Ax D-Apokalipse(apocalypse)

[Big Proof 4ever]

Lithuania is back in the game wit Germany again plus almighty Ax D,my verses are bout psychological violance end of world shit like that,yeah yeah u all wont understand ma lyrics still check it out,and me wants to say big thank you to twinnie C-Riz and Ax for helpin to finish this joint


heres link http://www.zshare.net/audio/52015628e269ca6a/



comments are appreciated
C-Riz verse lyrics
I swallow down enemies like obesity
Start searchin cuz I eat their whole identities
Look at them wannabes actin hard in front of me
Soon as I spit a verse they all gonna be
on their knees beggin me for remedy
the threat in me are words eatin u alive
to survive step in the arena only you and i
do or die is ur only opportunity
i just need me to drop an over sneeze
now it seems like hurricane blowin trees
they all gonna flee since they all knowin me
scared after sightin the cold amount of me
they keep runnin weak from this one guy
confrontin rhymes no pussy shit no gun fight
this like a new beginning after the sunrise
we like UV beams charged by the sunlight

[Solace]

Checking it right now...will feed

So its featuring C-Riz & Big Ax-D right, and the names Apocalypse? Sorry cause the way the title of this topic is, im a little confused.

edit: okay so the your verse is in a language i dont understand. but i guess it was good lmaoo. the beat was good, the flow was on point from what i heard. chorus was the only thing i actually liked out of the song, that was Big Ax-D right? C-Riz was handling 2nd verse i presume (im not so good with TRshady rappers voices), the lyrics i really couldnt understand, the pronunciation wasn't that good. Keep it up tho people.

[Big Proof 4ever]

Checking it right now...will feed

So its featuring C-Riz & Big Ax-D right, and the names Apocalypse? Sorry cause the way the title of this topic is, im a little confused.

edit: okay so the your verse is in a language i dont understand. but i guess it was good lmaoo. the beat was good, the flow was on point from what i heard. chorus was the only thing i actually liked out of the song, that was Big Ax-D right? C-Riz was handling 2nd verse i presume (im not so good with TRshady rappers voices), the lyrics i really couldnt understand, the pronunciation wasn't that good. Keep it up tho people.

yeah ax handles hook and c-riz 2nd verse,and thanks for chekin it out man

[B.A.D.]

word... amazing verses from both Profaz n' C-Riz!!

thanks for the feed

[mart85]

it's hard to judge you Profaz since I don't understand what you're saying, but it sounded good, you have a good-sounding voice, and the flow seemed on point

really sick hook by Ax-D

c-riz, your verse wasn't bad, I noticed you tried to rap with a lower voice, I think it was an improvement, but at times I thought it sounded a bit forced... that might just be because I'm not used to hear you with that voice tho... but still, good job on putting more emotion/aggressivity... keep on experimenting with your voice, with practise you'll get better at finding the best delivery for your verses

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

thx mart appreciated big time
also thx shadymademe...

[Tash8]

k listening, i'm feeling the beat... Profaz, I'm not really getting into your verse but it's hard to when it's in another language, flow wasn't really great, it seemed ur flowing more to nothing than the actual beat... but it kinda fits.

Ax-D, I like your chorus but it was to hard to understand everything and i should be able to do cause it's singing.

Chris, i like the voice ur using, prounciation was a big improvement, i just feel ur should add overlays to help your delivery a bit, especially in emphasized rhymes

profaz ur third verse was a bit better imo...

decent song

[Big Proof 4ever]

thanks alot mart and tash for chekin it out,appreciate it

[Big Proof 4ever]

I'm gonna check this today don't worry

who does your mixing

k man me handles my mixin

[Xray]

Profaz dammnnn killed this track by FARRRRRRRRR, you just ripped the fuck out of the beat bro, fast as fuck to. To do all that shit in one take thats wassup man, flow is superb.

Ax-d stop fronting with that fake ass voice man, use your voice, don't be trynna fake ya voice. Didn't enjoy the chorus cause its autotuned AND your using a fake voice aka your usuall bullshit. But mixing was good because for once in your life, your mixing sounded exactly like Profaz's verse so good job on that.

C-riz pfft, tryna copy ax-d and fake your voice to lol? what the fuck is up with you two, fake ass motherfuckers. Wack ass lyrics, not to mention how poorly your verse was mixed.

Haa congratulations idiots, you's ruined what could of been a good track. Profaz you killed it once again.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

haha yeah thx guyz experimenting..but still no apology for wut i am...so a nice fuck you for you sajjad but please pm me if u got a reply for this..cuz i dont want this thread to get destroyed
keep the feed coming fellaz

[Big Proof 4ever]

yo thanks chetman for feed,glad u liked it

zombie brother all i can say propz for feed mayne

[B.A.D.]

@ chet, thanks a lot for chekin bro appreciated

@ sajjad, thanks for chekin, also man... if you hate on me or hate on c-riz its not a reason to be angry n shit, cuz to be real, its pretti immature.. if what I do is not your style, ok, I respect that and you don't have to listen to me if you don't want to, but if you gonna feed me, take it serious, leave the hate apart and judge my parts diferent. anyways, thanks for listenin

thanks again to errbody that cheked

[Darkblade44431]

Nice beat, but, i only know english..nice flow though on the first verse, and then when there was english, nice job on lyrics and flow on that, but i think the vocals could be a bit louder.
Keep it up.

[Big Proof 4ever]

thanks for feed man