Battle Freestyle

[Solace]

I aint writing anything atm, so i freestyled Lol i needed something to start with so i bit Eminem on the first lines if you notice

I gotta say, i liked those rhymes you were spitting,
Especially since all of those lines were written,
Kid, you gotta be kidding, "Tha Sickest MC"?
Closer is actually 'Tha Bitchest MC", realllyyy,
You gotta be shitting me,
Your faker than all the bitches for free,
Here, have Ice Killa, this snitch is for free,
Cant understand you like you was screaming "AII MAMA-MEA",
You couldnt drop shit even if you had diarrhea!

[James R.]

It's not bad man. I feel like you had a hard time gettin vibin to this so it all seems a little forced. One thing I'd suggest is if you do bite a couple lines when you're writing for inspiration, just go in reverse and make original lines. Sometimes when you know where your song is gonna end up it's easier to see how it should start. I know it's a freestyle and it should be straight through and all that, but the more original it is the better. That aside, it was good practice. The only part I didn't like was rhyming sickest MC and bitchest MC. Kinda lame. But aside from that it was decent. Keep writin man.

[Solace]

It's not bad man. I feel like you had a hard time gettin vibin to this so it all seems a little forced. One thing I'd suggest is if you do bite a couple lines when you're writing for inspiration, just go in reverse and make original lines. Sometimes when you know where your song is gonna end up it's easier to see how it should start. I know it's a freestyle and it should be straight through and all that, but the more original it is the better. That aside, it was good practice. The only part I didn't like was rhyming sickest MC and bitchest MC. Kinda lame. But aside from that it was decent. Keep writin man.

Dude i was waiting forever for a reply Haha thanks man I really couldnt think of anything better for that bitchest and sickest part but im fine with it, im glad the rest was alright for you Ill try making more original lines next time i freestyle, thanks for checking

[James R.]

No problem man. I'm trying to make a point to stay on top of just about everything that comes into the CW section from this point forward.

[lilrossy]

it wasn't too bad. the rhyming was pretty basic, but it stil did da job. thought you ened it nicely too. good drop.

[Solace]

it wasn't too bad. the rhyming was pretty basic, but it stil did da job. thought you ened it nicely too. good drop.

Thanks

[Slim Zaddy]

it was'nt bad ,, it was to da point ,, which is good , flow was good 2 .. but try to use more rhymes ,, anyway gd luck pal .. keeep droppin

[Solace]

it was'nt bad ,, it was to da point ,, which is good , flow was good 2 .. but try to use more rhymes ,, anyway gd luck pal .. keeep droppin

Thanks, and i will

[MC Anonymous]

This was good, enjoyed it.

[Solace]

This was good, enjoyed it.

Thanks