Nice Guys Finish Last NEW SONG

[Emadyville]

Yeah lyrics were good, you just need to step your delivery up.

Yeah like I said man this song was a tough one, but check the one with DelinQuent, I know that ones better.

[Ka0t1c]

Pretty good.

You really need to improve on flowing with the beat. It seemed like you were off a lot. You need some rhythm.

i agree with that but the message is good, definitely re do it cuz this is a great beat and good lyrics

[Solace]

Great beat man. Flow is good for the beat. I thought the intro went on for too long, but it was sufferable. Delivery is what you needa improve on, that was the only flaw, and it completely ruined the chorus in my opinion. Lyrics were good too. 7.5/10

[yoshi]

wow, good job man. beat is fire, i loved it! matched the song perfectly, you know what i mean. flow - haven't heard your previous work, so i can't say if you improved, but if others say so.. anyways, i liked your flow. you may have slipped on some parts, but it wasn't bad. it was calm, so was the beat and the character of the song. i really liked the lyrics, got some good parts there. my fave part would be
I have had girls before, and girls to date,
Girls I’d give the world for and girls I hate,
Girls I’d give my life for that I could never date,
Why are girls always the cause of my distaste,
I could open every door, be a true gentleman,
The guy you’d take home and be ready to settle then

^^^dopeness

[Robbie G]

Yeah I agree with what's been said, the lyrics and message were great. Delivery and flow on parts could be improved.

Good job.

[Emadyville]

Thanks for everyone who checked it out, and for feeding, much appreciated.

[Rapsoldier101]

the lyrics r great bt u sound off beat when u delivered it, good concept tho, n i love ur other song its a shame, nice eminem sample. where did u find the ricky ticky tock acapella?

[Emadyville]

the lyrics r great bt u sound off beat when u delivered it, good concept tho, n i love ur other song its a shame, nice eminem sample. where did u find the ricky ticky tock acapella?

Thanks for feeding, I got it off zshare, someone made it for someone else but it was a free download so I took it lol