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Re: After Life

Postby mattsky1986 » Dec 4th, '08, 12:50

James R. wrote:I appreciate the compliments guys. I'm glad you enjoyed the read.

qns who takes the soul after death? is it the reaper or the angle of death. :confusion:
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Re: After Life

Postby yoshi » Dec 4th, '08, 13:45

great, just great. i rarely give feed, but i always read what you post and i came to conclusion that James > Timberlake's noodz

so yeah, i loved the song. chorus wasn't bad, but guess it doesn't matter that much, since both verses were pure dopenesss. it was deep and personal and iono.. i just loved it. :flower:
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Re: After Life

Postby James R. » Dec 4th, '08, 17:35

mattsky1986 wrote:
James R. wrote:I appreciate the compliments guys. I'm glad you enjoyed the read.

qns who takes the soul after death? is it the reaper or the angle of death. :confusion:

Definitely Biggie and Jam Master Jay. Tupac would, but he's a lazy bastard.

yoshi wrote:great, just great. i rarely give feed, but i always read what you post and i came to conclusion that James > Timberlake's noodz

so yeah, i loved the song. chorus wasn't bad, but guess it doesn't matter that much, since both verses were pure dopenesss. it was deep and personal and iono.. i just loved it. :flower:

I don't think I've ever seen you leave feed, so please understand how honored I am that you'd come in here to read my songs. I really appreciate it. I'm really glad you liked it. And me > timberlake's nudey pics makes me :smoking: :8) :smoking: :8) :smoking:
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Re: After Life

Postby yoshi » Dec 4th, '08, 20:49

James R. wrote:I don't think I've ever seen you leave feed, so please understand how honored I am that you'd come in here to read my songs. I really appreciate it. I'm really glad you liked it. And me > timberlake's nudey pics makes me :smoking: :8) :smoking: :8) :smoking:



best things come to those who wait for 'em. :shifty:

and smh i do leave feed sometimes!! :b:
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Re: After Life

Postby Ice_Scarred » Dec 10th, '08, 03:26

Damn. That was lyrical massacre at its finest. The whole rhyme structure had me rolling. That was beautiful shit man. Keep it up. :smoking:
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Re: After Life

Postby James R. » Dec 10th, '08, 03:27

Hey man thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it
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