by James R. » Dec 16th, '08, 20:35
Just so we can settle this shit for good, I'm going to bar by bar this shit for you. And then give you the categorical break down of my vote. Anyone calls me a dick rider and I'll fuck their reputation up.
dude fake's like he's a Hot Rhymer but seriously he only Rocks Minors
his real profession's a Cock Finder that's why he's all about Scott Steiner
Nice rhyming. Nice punch. I think I remember him menitoning Steiner, so good play off that. Probably the best bar of your drop 4/5
the punchline champ couldn't Deal Me Blows warning j's a snitch he Squeals People
I'm under his skin like a Steel Needle and his period the only time he Really Flow's
Haha funny. Structure threw me for a sec, but I got it now. Humor made this a good punch. 3.5/5
be prepared to see j's Bones Shatter as he gets rocked and I twist his Dome Backwards
you've written every Known Wack Verse so drop the cassidy act and be your Own Rapper
Decent shot at the Cassidy thing. Not the best bar through this, but it's good to hold it together. 3.5/5
I'll Find and Climb an Incline just to drop your body on a Mine
procede to blow your Mind then skullfuck you untill you go Blind
Eh. Not really feelin it, nothing personal, nothing special, weak ending imo. 3/5
Overall: I liked it. Had some nice punches, touched on a couple J Roc specific things. Nothing spectacular throughout it, but it was definitely a nice drop. Flow varied from punch to punch, but individually they flowed. You could have definitely done better, but since you probably used your best shit in the 2 diss songs I can't hold it against you lol.
3.5/5 total
This SISSY HARDER? YOU? Watch-tha-Nine Send You "Across-Tha-Sky" Like WISHING STARS'LL DO!!!
J got tha SICKEST BARS ITS TRUE & Tha Cig-Ock'll Show u "Big-Shots" Like ah CeleBRITY BARBEQUE!!!
For some reason I doubt you're going to shoot at him. E-thuggin is not hot. Not a bad bar, but not relevant. Don't start off with fillers, it makes it hard to vibe with. Good flow though. Too bad you're back on the fucking caps lock bull shit. Fucking STOP IT or I swear to god... 3/5
His WEAPONS AH SHOOT? Nope he Only "STRETCHING" THA TRUTH"!!! u Not "FLEXING" THEM TOOLS
He STEP INA BOOTH? Stop-It-Clown If He "Cockin-Rounds" Must Mean He Had SEX WITH SOME BOOBS!!
(cock in rounds)
Decent word play, I remember a couple gun lines he had in a diss he did, so nice touch on that. Much better punch. Decent multies. 4/5
Acting-Shook I'll Grab-Him,-Look & Give This "Captain-Hooks" To Stay in NEVER LAND, BELEIVE ME!!!
I'm BETTER MAN ITS EZ I Got More-Ghats To Give 'Rain' "Four-Casts" Like tha WEATHERMAN ON T.V!!!
( Rain Forecasts)
Again, nice wordplay. Back to the gun shit, it's very boring. It's just a little shit talking. Nothing personal that jumps out at me. Just a harder hitting filler. 3/5
Battle? Fuck This TRANSACTION You WHACK FAGGIT It's like im "On Stage" how I'm "FAN"TASTIC!!!
Ya Girl Tits HALF AV'REGE Even Mine Are Rather-Bigger Hers is like "Action-Figures"..DAMN "PLASTIC"!
This was sooo random and irrelevant and probably ruined this drop. Get something personal. Talk about how he's from upstate NY or anything. Nameplay or something would have helped. The punch was just not hard hitting at all. 1.5/5
Overall: Honestly I liked it better than Rain's verse until the last 2 lines. I think had it been a hard punch you would have taken it, but you folded. It flowed pretty well. The multies were there. The wordplay was there. The personals were definitely lacking. The humor was average throughout. It was a good battle verse save the last 2 lines.
3/5 total
Punches: Rain because of the personals
Multies: Tie
Wordplay: J Roc
Name Play: J Roc
Personals: Rain
Flow: Rain
Enjoyability: Tie
My overall vote goes to Rain Matrix. J... you gave him this one by ending your verse on such a whack note. Better luck next time. And be ON TIME next time.